From lojban+bncCK6u3p69DBDU8efjBBoEhr8YSg@googlegroups.com Sat Aug 28 23:06:32 2010 Received: from mail-vw0-f61.google.com ([209.85.212.61]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1Opb2B-0005KN-VD; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 23:06:31 -0700 Received: by vws6 with SMTP id 6sf957177vws.16 for ; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 23:06:21 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:x-beenthere:received:received:received :received:received-spf:received:received:received:received :references:to:subject:date:x-aol-ip:in-reply-to:x-mb-message-source :mime-version:from:x-mb-message-type:x-mailer:received:message-id :x-spam-flag:x-aol-sender:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type; bh=twsZSAgJe8nXN8A71pElOiIPtY8NBAI9xIcnEuXDooA=; b=grulUePPMP0bEkiGWuoOl03xQQoZVlmJQgsy/jiotWYbSAF45Syf6t4xktq7GsL9R2 tmMcuLFP73XdKcZGdnuLFSaW2+OtQQX1UD6kwavaJKWvfpmJ5pcsAOSUIEZZK5DHCnGm MmIhrv646i2ZSLdPOXJQppkyDhtct/L2rEv4M= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=x-beenthere:received-spf:references:to:subject:date:x-aol-ip :in-reply-to:x-mb-message-source:mime-version:from:x-mb-message-type :x-mailer:message-id:x-spam-flag:x-aol-sender:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type; b=hQ0z0B12Gq9wUmuQ4a4BJkiaC5QHZAR7f4HItHLK1MlKRNGWJ+rFy1KKX7x226kB54 dhGmXXcuiX60i6O0Es3tLWDlnnven9u2UkO3WcreWrOJUMvQKb2dFreCZgy6Pg/Hx/RJ IhoLtr9dCTgNLlTVx00AECSQ8ll5fNbTvjADE= Received: by 10.220.60.135 with SMTP id p7mr53651vch.34.1283061972769; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 23:06:12 -0700 (PDT) X-BeenThere: lojban@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.220.111.137 with SMTP id s9ls691778vcp.1.p; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 23:06:11 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.220.85.194 with SMTP id p2mr885788vcl.5.1283061971316; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 23:06:11 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.220.85.194 with SMTP id p2mr885787vcl.5.1283061971270; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 23:06:11 -0700 (PDT) Received: from imr-db01.mx.aol.com (imr-db01.mx.aol.com [205.188.91.95]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTP id m9si779722vck.14.2010.08.28.23.06.11; Sat, 28 Aug 2010 23:06:11 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of Thirderivative@aol.com designates 205.188.91.95 as permitted sender) client-ip=205.188.91.95; Received: from imo-ma03.mx.aol.com (imo-ma03.mx.aol.com [64.12.78.138]) by imr-db01.mx.aol.com (8.14.1/8.14.1) with ESMTP id o7T66AY9004024 for ; Sun, 29 Aug 2010 02:06:10 -0400 Received: from Thirderivative@aol.com by imo-ma03.mx.aol.com (mail_out_v42.9.) id r.e6d.67da6cc (37688) for ; Sun, 29 Aug 2010 02:06:05 -0400 (EDT) Received: from smtprly-me01.mx.aol.com (smtprly-me01.mx.aol.com [64.12.95.102]) by cia-mb08.mx.aol.com (v129.4) with ESMTP id MAILCIAMB084-b2b34c79f8cc313; Sun, 29 Aug 2010 02:06:05 -0400 Received: from webmail-m073 (webmail-m073.sim.aol.com [64.12.141.31]) by smtprly-me01.mx.aol.com (v129.4) with ESMTP id MAILSMTPRLYME015-b2b34c79f8cc313; Sun, 29 Aug 2010 02:06:04 -0400 References: <8CD1502F8EF1631-1880-ED16@webmail-m073.sysops.aol.com> <18102c9e-f548-49e4-8fb5-06d1117c46dc@h17g2000pri.googlegroups.com> To: lojban@googlegroups.com Subject: Re: [lojban] Religious document translation. Date: Sun, 29 Aug 2010 02:06:04 -0400 X-AOL-IP: 76.8.216.14 In-Reply-To: <18102c9e-f548-49e4-8fb5-06d1117c46dc@h17g2000pri.googlegroups.com> X-MB-Message-Source: WebUI MIME-Version: 1.0 From: Seth X-MB-Message-Type: User X-Mailer: AOL Webmail 32447-STANDARD Received: from 76.8.216.14 by webmail-m073.sysops.aol.com (64.12.141.31) with HTTP (WebMailUI); Sun, 29 Aug 2010 02:06:04 -0400 Message-Id: <8CD155765F26125-1880-13721@webmail-m073.sysops.aol.com> X-Spam-Flag: NO X-AOL-SENDER: Thirderivative@aol.com X-Original-Sender: thirderivative@aol.com X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of Thirderivative@aol.com designates 205.188.91.95 as permitted sender) smtp.mail=Thirderivative@aol.com Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: Sender: lojban@googlegroups.com List-Subscribe: , List-Unsubscribe: , Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="--------MB_8CD155765F723E7_1880_1AD86_webmail-m073.sysops.aol.com" ----------MB_8CD155765F723E7_1880_1AD86_webmail-m073.sysops.aol.com Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 thanks for the input. I intentionally ignored the cmevla convention for aes= thetic reasons. For some reason, when i pasted the document in, some words = lost their spaces between them. this is not a problem in the original docum= ent, and i dont know what caused it. nor did i notice until you brought it = up. i will check out my lujvo to make sure they validate properly. thanks -----Original Message----- From: Lindar To: lojban Sent: Sat, Aug 28, 2010 3:58 pm Subject: [lojban] Religious document translation. RE: Correct e-mail. Yeah, it is. You can also go to http://groups.google.com/group/lojban/ to browse through old threads. RE: Translation. You're missing dotside on your cmevla (whether or not you care is another issue entirely), your grouping is confusing (article 2 "madzeienai" needs denpa bu, article 3 "tadjilo" and article 13 "siskutu'a" you need to either use whitespace or mark emphasis because this breaks apart to {ta djIlo} not {tAdji lo} and {siskUtu'a} not {sIsku tu'a}) and you have a few invalid words (line 4 "lo nunmadxagtik" is not valid), and you have some unnecessary usage of {cu} (on line 8 "la biblos. cu selsku", which actually doesn't make sense, btw). (While we're on the topic, you should never have to use CU, so if it looks like you need it, then you need to not use it and study more instead.) --=20 You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups= =20 "lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegrou= ps.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban= ?hl=3Den. =20 --=20 You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "= lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegrou= ps.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban= ?hl=3Den. ----------MB_8CD155765F723E7_1880_1AD86_webmail-m073.sysops.aol.com Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1 thanks for the input. I intentionally ign= ored the cmevla convention for aesthetic reasons. For some reason, when i p= asted the document in, some words lost their spaces between them. this is n= ot a problem in the original document, and i dont know what caused it. nor = did i notice until you brought it up. i will check out my lujvo to make sur= e they validate properly.

thanks


-----= Original Message-----
From: Lindar <lindarthebard@yahoo.com>
To: lojban <lojban@googlegroups.com>
Sent: Sat, Aug 28, 2010 3:58 pm
Subject: [lojban] Religious document translation.

RE: Correct e-mail.

Yeah, it is.

You can also go to http://groups.google.com/group/lojban/ to browse
through old threads.

RE: Translation.
You're missing dotside on your cmevla (whether or not you care is
another issue entirely), your grouping is confusing (article 2
"madzeienai" needs denpa bu, article 3 "tadjilo" and article 13
"siskutu'a" you need to either use whitespace or mark emphasis because
this breaks apart to {ta djIlo} not {tAdji lo} and {siskUtu'a} not
{sIsku tu'a}) and you have a few invalid words (line 4 "lo
nunmadxagtik" is not valid), and you have some unnecessary usage of
{cu} (on line 8 "la biblos. cu selsku", which actually doesn't make
sense, btw). (While we're on the topic, you should never have to use
CU, so if it looks like you need it, then you need to not use it and
study more instead.)

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