Just a suggestion (or reminder)! When you are

satisfied witht the corrections, be sure to put it

on the Lojban wiki at

http://www.lojban.org/tiki/tiki-index.php?page=3DTexts In Lojban=

totus

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From: Seth <thirderivative@aol.com>
To: lojban@googlegroups.com
Sent: Sat, August 28, 2010 4:01:43 PM
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I cant remember if this is the correct em= ail for the mailing list.=20

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anyways, i d= id a translation lately, and know i made many grammatical errors. I was hop= ing someone would care to look through it and help me eliminate them. I wou= ld be especially grateful for page numbers from the cll or an explanation o= n my mistake and how to do it correctly. I am still learning. The document = is religious, so if you are offended by such, simply ignore this. I know i = made mistakes with nesting especially, but havent yet found where that is c= overed in the cll. It has been over a year since i read it through. I also = know that my word choice and such do not match the original perfectly. This= is a stylistic translator's preference, so I am not really looking for com= mentary on that, though i will accept it just as well.

the or= iginal document is here: http://scriptures.lds.org/en/a_o= f_f/1

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seryf=

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Articles of faith In Lojban

1. mi=92a krici lo du=92u zasti fa la cevni no=92u l= e cimni patfu ge=92u e le ri bersa no=92u la iezus kristos ge=92u e le cens= a ruxpre

2. mi=92a krici lo du=92u lo prenu cu ba selsfa fi l= o ri madzei enai lo la adam nu naltinbe

3. mi=92a krici lo du=92u lo po=92o la Kristos nunma= dzeile=92i cu tadji lo nu ro remna se ruxnu=92a lo ri tinbe be lo ro xister= ctu ke flalu joi ritli ke=92e

4. mi=92a krici lo du=92u lo nunkri fi lo nolraitru = no=92u la iezus kristos ge=92u ku ce=92o lo nunmadxagtik ce=92o lo nunjir t= ezu=92e lo nu selfax lo madzei ku ku ce=92o lo nu punji lo xance tezu=92e t= u=92a lo seldu=92a po=92u lo nu censa ruxpre kansa lu=92u ku pamoi lo xiste= rctu ke jicmu joi ritli ke=92e

5. mi=92a krici lo du=92u lo nu nanmu ku selmi=92e l= a cevni cu sarcu lo nu ctuca fo lo xisterctu ku e nu catni lo ri ritli ku l= o nu cevdatni terdu=92a e nu punji be lo xance be lo catni

6. mi=92a krici lo du=92u lo cabdei xi=92ojdagri cu = mintu lo laldo djedi xi=92ojdagri lo za=92i ponse lo mintu selca=92i po=92u= lo xisraibortinbe ce lo cevka=92i ce lo kurji ce lo ruxctu ce lo ruxkamjun= du=92a ce zo=92e

7. mi=92a krici lo du=92u zasti fa lo ruxstati po=92= u lo ka banstati ce lo ka bavju=92o ce lo nu cevdatni terdu=92a ce lo nu ru= xvi=92a ce lo nu ka=92orgau ce zo=92e

8. mi=92a krici lo du=92u la biblos. cu selsku la ce= vni kei du=92i lo jei ra drani xelfanva .i mi=92a krici ji=92a lo du=92u lo= cukta be fi la mormon. cu selsku la cevni

9. mi=92a krici lo ro ba=92o je ca ca=92o te fa=92ir= gau be fi la cevni be=92o e lo du=92u ri ba fa=92irgau fi lo so=92i banli j= e vajni lo ra seltru

10. mi=92a krici lo du=92u lai isreil cu jmaji e lo = du=92u lo pano lanzu cu selxru e lo du=92u la zaiyn no=92u la poi remoi dje= rusalem ge=92u cu ba selzba ne=92i lo merko tumla kei e lo du=92u la kristo= s cu ba turni bu=92u lo terdi kei e lo du=92u lo terdi cu selxru lo za=92i = cnino je panpi

11. mi=92a posxu=92a lo krali be fa lo nu jdase=92u = be la cevni ku ca=92i lo mi=92a selmarde gi=92e curmi lo nu lo ro prenu ku = smiselkrali lo nu jdase=92u lo ri selcu=92a ri bu=92u lo py selcu=92a

12. mi=92a krici lo du=92u ma=92a dejni lo nu ma=92a= tinbe ku lo turni e lo flalu

13. mi=92a krici lo du=92u vrude fa lo nu stace ce l= o nu selylacka=92e ce lo nu cinvu=92e ce lo nu xendo ce lo nu gasnu be lo n= u xamgu .i mi=92a minde lo la pal nu stidi .i va=92i mi=92a krici lo ro xam= gu gi=92e pacna ri .i mi=92a pu renvi lo so=92i raktu gi=92e ba renvi lo ro= a=92o mi=92a raktu .i mi=92a sisku tu=92a lo ro vrude ce ro melbi ce ro vr= ude gubykai

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