From lojban+bncCK7Yk5CUCxDkgrXkBBoEhV-Big@googlegroups.com Sun Sep 12 14:09:21 2010 Received: from mail-vw0-f61.google.com ([209.85.212.61]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1OutnN-0003eT-A8; Sun, 12 Sep 2010 14:09:21 -0700 Received: by vws6 with SMTP id 6sf2352876vws.16 for ; Sun, 12 Sep 2010 14:08:58 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:x-beenthere:received:received:received :received:received-spf:received:mime-version:received:received:date :message-id:subject:from:to:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type; bh=XcQmxS6UjuL+7CE0U0jOC+n+4eFmCgV3NyTGrxJhdqI=; b=xZZ4Wu2BasPZFROE10ecACX5es7c0Ud4sqnNz5+mEuizxNVrharbILVyG+pKONSKmk G231XibqQSmrz8IKq9G7aew3cLa/2Q57NXRbHairu3gZVGzMo6/BHSa8zLIdGTLgmu5F A5Stu7eBG5WdLC2yFu13R+wQiG93O3kswrgrc= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=x-beenthere:received-spf:mime-version:date:message-id:subject:from :to:x-original-sender:x-original-authentication-results:reply-to :precedence:mailing-list:list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive :sender:list-subscribe:list-unsubscribe:content-type; b=ONnB8TzFtM/kbsrWK1f6q225fuWUcLN3zMdtZS2HRaigHWeDNQcbBETmK0eXLPOdpl AKOQ10VAvKs8NC+gs2fLHHy3/zdkx+cpjoVv7uLl+1Pot3/CVArrrVfqMNvCBuN1QEAb yDhs9ehfNutcJYeMlEV7i8nrVTyksJjXT9lWY= Received: by 10.220.63.79 with SMTP id a15mr117428vci.18.1284325732955; Sun, 12 Sep 2010 14:08:52 -0700 (PDT) X-BeenThere: lojban@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.220.179.139 with SMTP id bq11ls1719142vcb.2.p; Sun, 12 Sep 2010 14:08:51 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.220.199.197 with SMTP id et5mr856422vcb.10.1284325731908; Sun, 12 Sep 2010 14:08:51 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.220.199.197 with SMTP id et5mr856420vcb.10.1284325731875; Sun, 12 Sep 2010 14:08:51 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail-qw0-f45.google.com (mail-qw0-f45.google.com [209.85.216.45]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTP id e4si623128vcm.3.2010.09.12.14.08.50; Sun, 12 Sep 2010 14:08:50 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of rdentato@gmail.com designates 209.85.216.45 as permitted sender) client-ip=209.85.216.45; Received: by qwk4 with SMTP id 4so651010qwk.32 for ; Sun, 12 Sep 2010 14:08:50 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.229.235.65 with SMTP id kf1mr2665796qcb.42.1284325722844; Sun, 12 Sep 2010 14:08:42 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.229.1.69 with HTTP; Sun, 12 Sep 2010 14:08:42 -0700 (PDT) Date: Sun, 12 Sep 2010 23:08:42 +0200 Message-ID: Subject: [lojban] le virnu smani blozeile'a From: Remo Dentato To: lojban , lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com X-Original-Sender: rdentato@gmail.com X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of rdentato@gmail.com designates 209.85.216.45 as permitted sender) smtp.mail=rdentato@gmail.com; dkim=pass (test mode) header.i=@gmail.com Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: Sender: lojban@googlegroups.com List-Subscribe: , List-Unsubscribe: , Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 I've a first draft of the translation for a new jbove'a cukta. The title is "The Brave Monkey Pirate" This is much more complex than the first on I made, so I expect to find a lot of mistakes in this draft. Some of the pages were above my level, I hope I've been able to render them more or less. You can find the translation here: http://www.dentato.com/the-brave-monkey-pirate-jbo-review.pdf It would be interesting for me to know how much of it is understandable without looking at the original which is here: http://bluebison.net/books/monkey-pirate/pps/the-brave-monkey-pirate.pps (note that the powerpoint presentation has one page more than the PDF version at http://bluebison.net/books/monkey-pirate/the-brave-monkey-pirate.pdf, that's why I started from that one). Thanks for you corrections, comments and feedback. Remo -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban?hl=en.