From lojban+bncCNTPpI2KGxC209vkBBoEgD6JBA@googlegroups.com Sun Sep 19 21:57:42 2010 Received: from mail-pw0-f61.google.com ([209.85.160.61]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1OxYRe-0003HR-4c; Sun, 19 Sep 2010 21:57:41 -0700 Received: by pwj6 with SMTP id 6sf495982pwj.16 for ; Sun, 19 Sep 2010 21:57:32 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:x-beenthere:received:received:received :received:received-spf:x-authority-analysis:x-cloudmark-score :x-originating-ip:received:received:from:to:subject:date:user-agent :references:in-reply-to:mime-version:message-id:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type:content-disposition; bh=MzLI+hPz0sVD+/l4M7y9lr154w4YCnKoSXLF77yhIZA=; b=pqkwPCAgLgKxomQoZOj/Y+sIcD0GexGG8Oey8YMp+eZrX9is8hbEbPaSS1gWVSQfh3 3NwVuUZmUvygsv7rYm+toFKxdkS3jWBSFzL5e4q9PIlTfINe3/OwrwiBFioushi9u56h V6PjA0F+yI55l++BQ8w5iWK5vjp3wWRkjJsH0= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=x-beenthere:received-spf:x-authority-analysis:x-cloudmark-score :x-originating-ip:from:to:subject:date:user-agent:references :in-reply-to:mime-version:message-id:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type:content-disposition; b=eZSFprtXFHbtM6BTu1hd4W4SS3Y6aVD4OQHo6McFM5/luvf9mmpZUVJNMucFSGBctp XJeP49/ks++uvq9W2lY1l+sEQ9l40dQFMpdUPNowdX/4NtoRtGEvuxZpaSzXmzSKS183 lkVVADnM3gTAoKW3yNGnFbt/yx3mNDiYSeQZI= Received: by 10.142.149.29 with SMTP id w29mr104628wfd.38.1284958646539; Sun, 19 Sep 2010 21:57:26 -0700 (PDT) X-BeenThere: lojban@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.142.6.9 with SMTP id 9ls6559881wff.3.p; Sun, 19 Sep 2010 21:57:24 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.142.81.4 with SMTP id e4mr1846103wfb.27.1284958644571; Sun, 19 Sep 2010 21:57:24 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.142.81.4 with SMTP id e4mr1846102wfb.27.1284958644538; Sun, 19 Sep 2010 21:57:24 -0700 (PDT) Received: from cdptpa-omtalb.mail.rr.com (cdptpa-omtalb.mail.rr.com [75.180.132.123]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTP id e3si6694745wfh.3.2010.09.19.21.57.24; Sun, 19 Sep 2010 21:57:24 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: neutral (google.com: 75.180.132.123 is neither permitted nor denied by best guess record for domain of phma@phma.optus.nu) client-ip=75.180.132.123; X-Authority-Analysis: v=1.1 cv=qYdCISDWl1sUyBSFf+jnLj+Or9L17viYAEUxs6cFsIk= c=1 sm=0 a=x_6DW41COgMA:10 a=wPDyFdB5xvgA:10 a=8nJEP1OIZ-IA:10 a=9o99xeNKNPYSmM5t9x5+TQ==:17 a=sIjASDoaAAAA:8 a=k95SiJfuX1yyJMFy4RsA:9 a=-CnFVN5hcoYc_T6BYmYVXuy1DUAA:4 a=wPNLvfGTeEIA:10 a=9o99xeNKNPYSmM5t9x5+TQ==:117 X-Cloudmark-Score: 0 X-Originating-IP: 75.176.118.168 Received: from [75.176.118.168] ([75.176.118.168:45149] helo=chausie) by cdptpa-oedge03.mail.rr.com (envelope-from ) (ecelerity 2.2.2.39 r()) with ESMTP id 6E/38-08209-2B9E69C4; Mon, 20 Sep 2010 04:57:23 +0000 Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by chausie (Postfix) with ESMTP id 033632AC7 for ; Mon, 20 Sep 2010 00:57:18 -0400 (EDT) From: Pierre Abbat To: lojban@googlegroups.com Subject: Re: [lojban] [update] le virnu smani blozeile'a Date: Mon, 20 Sep 2010 00:57:04 -0400 User-Agent: KMail/1.9.6 (enterprise 0.20070907.709405) References: In-Reply-To: MIME-Version: 1.0 Message-Id: <201009200057.08637.phma@phma.optus.nu> X-Original-Sender: phma@phma.optus.nu X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; spf=neutral (google.com: 75.180.132.123 is neither permitted nor denied by best guess record for domain of phma@phma.optus.nu) smtp.mail=phma@phma.optus.nu Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: Sender: lojban@googlegroups.com List-Subscribe: , List-Unsubscribe: , Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Disposition: inline On Friday 17 September 2010 16:23:52 Remo Dentato wrote: > I posted a new version of "le virnu smani blozeile'a" here: > > http://dentato.com/the-brave-monkey-pirate-jbo-review.pdf > > I hope I addressed all the comments you gave me. > > I'm sure there are still mistakes and things to be fixed, thanks for > any comment you may have. p. 5: "beme'e" should be used once at most. The following times he should be called "la modix. noi blozeile'a" or "la modix. no'u le blozeile'a" or "le blozeile'a no'u la modix.". p. 7: I agree with Jorge's "noi ba jadni". p. 9: I'd say "le mikce briju", as apparently they both had the same doctor in mind. p. 11: "lo jinku befi lenu skorbuti" doesn't make sense. Scurvy is a deficiency, not infectious, disease, so there is no vaccine for it. The shot might be a fat-soluble version of vitamin C (ascorbyl palmitate). p. 12: "na serai nelci" is unclear. Modi's liking of syringes is not the greatest among ... what? I'd just say "na nelci". p. 20: "ca'o le je'erse'a" should be "ca'o le nu je'erse'a". p. 22: "le mikce briju" Pierre -- Don't buy a French car in Holland. It may be a citroen. -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. 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