From lojban+bncCK7Yk5CUCxDZt9zkBBoEnxB6Hw@googlegroups.com Mon Sep 20 01:31:37 2010 Received: from mail-gw0-f61.google.com ([74.125.83.61]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1Oxbmf-0005VD-C7; Mon, 20 Sep 2010 01:31:36 -0700 Received: by gwb11 with SMTP id 11sf4654612gwb.16 for ; Mon, 20 Sep 2010 01:31:26 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:x-beenthere:received:mime-version :received:received:date:in-reply-to:x-ip:references:user-agent :x-http-useragent:message-id:subject:from:to:x-original-sender :reply-to:precedence:mailing-list:list-id:list-post:list-help :list-archive:sender:list-subscribe:list-unsubscribe:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; bh=6mc+si+TFQI8n/edh/58fZAgE1ukXu/81XYgOY9Dy3o=; b=1sQoEThy9nmq5/4bXDbhSDrVRljPEfwf9SIu6FUAQt7hj0i0s9ixtHUQ42q+PyDtTh 3pfXpt/vBSCABye4aV9SFywEj3o1DF1GNoynohWpCmgB2fhV50nix84Z18f89kIZ7FcO c1J2r3XxefpznOtwou56siFuQ0WV4VhejvdeY= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=x-beenthere:mime-version:date:in-reply-to:x-ip:references :user-agent:x-http-useragent:message-id:subject:from:to :x-original-sender:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list:list-id :list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=VVvaG0D+IOOKhU28SZhIF6EqZAnKNRyd2eg0qfGTT2nkN+TynxjsbaC2ysVzbAXKnX kBzG0kjEtPVkgggqfpEH859k1GYmYgy+BC5r5h6cnVNPy+I7SDVx2F2KcEprn94oE17a uYTjjthJAayC3cM3lfrI3cVE8szmKW10W6EWc= Received: by 10.100.235.38 with SMTP id i38mr287482anh.47.1284971481227; Mon, 20 Sep 2010 01:31:21 -0700 (PDT) X-BeenThere: lojban@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.100.49.22 with SMTP id w22ls2038267anw.2.p; Mon, 20 Sep 2010 01:31:19 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.101.27.33 with SMTP id e33mr296736anj.57.1284971479664; Mon, 20 Sep 2010 01:31:19 -0700 (PDT) Received: by c13g2000vbr.googlegroups.com with HTTP; Mon, 20 Sep 2010 01:31:19 -0700 (PDT) Date: Mon, 20 Sep 2010 01:31:19 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: X-IP: 204.104.55.242 References: <201009200057.08637.phma@phma.optus.nu> User-Agent: G2/1.0 X-HTTP-UserAgent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows; U; Windows NT 6.0; en-US; rv:1.9.2.9) Gecko/20100824 Firefox/3.6.9,gzip(gfe) Message-ID: Subject: [lojban] Re: [update] le virnu smani blozeile'a From: remod To: lojban X-Original-Sender: rdentato@gmail.com Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: Sender: lojban@googlegroups.com List-Subscribe: , List-Unsubscribe: , Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Latest version (so far): http://www.lojban.org/tiki/tiki-download_wiki_atta= chment.php?attId=3D724 Remo On Sep 20, 8:18=A0am, Remo Dentato wrote: > On Mon, Sep 20, 2010 at 6:57 AM, Pierre Abbat wrote: > > On Friday 17 September 2010 16:23:52 Remo Dentato wrote: > > > p. 5: "beme'e" should be used once at most. The following times he shou= ld be > > called "la modix. noi blozeile'a" or "la modix. no'u le blozeile'a" or = "le > > blozeile'a no'u la modix.". > > The problem I have is that in "le mamta be leblozeile'a no'u la > modix." the name is attached to "le mamta" and "be no'u" is not > grammatical. =A0I agree it's not the best solution but for now I'll > leave beme'e > > > p. 7: I agree with Jorge's "noi ba jadni". > > Yes, > > > p. 11: "lo jinku befi lenu skorbuti" doesn't make sense. Scurvy is a > > deficiency, not infectious, disease, so there is no vaccine for it. The= shot > > might be a fat-soluble version of vitamin C (ascorbyl palmitate). > > That's true but I had problem with "protect". Since {bandu} requires > an event it would be much complicated (to me) to translate and, since > the original said that the shot would have protected him from > "something", I pretended the shot had some vaccine mixed with Vitamin > C against scurvy. THat might be scientifically inaccurate but I > guessed that children wouldn't have noticed. > > btw I understand the reason but I think that it's a shame we can't > easily express concepts like "the mother protects the child". We must > always specify "how". > > > p. 12: "na serai nelci" is unclear. Modi's liking of syringes is not th= e > > greatest among ... what? I'd just say "na nelci". > > Yep, that's gone already > > > p. 20: "ca'o le je'erse'a" should be "ca'o le nu je'erse'a". > > Corrected > > > p. 22: "le mikce briju" > > I think I exchanged lo/le a dozen of times by now :) > > Thanks, > =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0Remo --=20 You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "= lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegrou= ps.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban= ?hl=3Den.