From lojban+bncCLr6ktCfBBCxiLjlBBoEvWiC8Q@googlegroups.com Thu Oct 07 10:32:49 2010 Received: from mail-px0-f189.google.com ([209.85.212.189]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1P3uKi-0003H9-9M; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:32:49 -0700 Received: by pxi19 with SMTP id 19sf28650pxi.16 for ; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:32:38 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:x-beenthere:received:received:received :received:received-spf:received:received:received:date:from:to :subject:message-id:mail-followup-to:mime-version:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type:content-disposition; bh=C0M/u3lgnf7eWuSIfjD5K1ImS11MYHuFpWUnO49zdDI=; b=QCitLEB4Tr3xLK6TE6mnIjLDAgt/eq/HBDo7dfT7zv13cF/LqjfD8BwXv5Z6PMWbWD Ee/8EUJ8CaBHv4eZ2oi273yKyYmP4AMUaHTWpYe6W8o9AkhSpngom/YS6c0JOBOIcCZm kh/k8Ljmx8J9Ec4CaOlWfNl7NKhB6sHXklBco= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=x-beenthere:received-spf:date:from:to:subject:message-id :mail-followup-to:mime-version:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type:content-disposition; b=imaOPFCLKuX/Y4wnFmesjqIKVU7gs3FRkLseQKB+wIuzmXj7ovjp9XMo1a4wZZD5Lp LRC5Vt9+6Zb60/4mf1aW3ukNZlbuOx8lPDNPKKQ01RwcCLChoSzwnLonJf2E/Aes0q5p T8XsAaHWN3iUp0ycQj7z8/p1rTMkK1NkILPUE= Received: by 10.142.62.31 with SMTP id k31mr51191wfa.44.1286472753203; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:32:33 -0700 (PDT) X-BeenThere: lojban@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.142.194.14 with SMTP id r14ls322305wff.2.p; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:32:32 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.142.208.21 with SMTP id f21mr275021wfg.30.1286472752494; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:32:32 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.142.208.21 with SMTP id f21mr275019wfg.30.1286472752470; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:32:32 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail-px0-f173.google.com (mail-px0-f173.google.com [209.85.212.173]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTP id h6si2815381wfj.5.2010.10.07.10.32.32; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:32:32 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: neutral (google.com: 209.85.212.173 is neither permitted nor denied by best guess record for domain of alanpost@sunflowerriver.org) client-ip=209.85.212.173; Received: by pxi2 with SMTP id 2so52509pxi.18 for ; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:32:32 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.114.131.13 with SMTP id e13mr1249185wad.81.1286472751247; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:32:31 -0700 (PDT) Received: from sunflowerriver.org (c-68-35-167-179.hsd1.nm.comcast.net [68.35.167.179]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id c22sm1306463waa.1.2010.10.07.10.32.29 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:32:30 -0700 (PDT) Date: Thu, 7 Oct 2010 11:32:27 -0600 From: ".alyn.post." To: lojban@googlegroups.com Subject: [lojban] la lojbo kurji Message-ID: <20101007173227.GB27477@alice.local> Mail-Followup-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Mime-Version: 1.0 X-Original-Sender: alyn.post@lodockikumazvati.org X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; spf=neutral (google.com: 209.85.212.173 is neither permitted nor denied by best guess record for domain of alanpost@sunflowerriver.org) smtp.mail=alanpost@sunflowerriver.org Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: Sender: lojban@googlegroups.com List-Subscribe: , List-Unsubscribe: , Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Disposition: inline I've written an oath for myself regarding Lojban. This stretched my fluency a bit, so I'd like some feedback on how I might make it better. ni'o mi me la lojbo kurji .i mi ca nupre lo za'i go'o kei mi .e la lojbo kurji .i mi ba tavla fo la lobjan. de'i lo ro djedi .i mi ba jmina lo cnino nupre lo vi nupre .i ganai mi tavla fi no da de'i lo cabdei gi mi tavla fi lo vi nupre Any obvious and glaring problems? What about subtle ones? -Alan -- .i ko djuno fi le do sevzi -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban?hl=en.