From lojban+bncCJ2UzZHuDRDulLjlBBoEcuFNWQ@googlegroups.com Thu Oct 07 10:59:27 2010 Received: from mail-ww0-f61.google.com ([74.125.82.61]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1P3ukV-0006wV-BG; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:59:27 -0700 Received: by wwe15 with SMTP id 15sf32486wwe.16 for ; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:59:16 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:x-beenthere:received:received:received :received:received-spf:received:mime-version:received:received :in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :x-original-sender:x-original-authentication-results:reply-to :precedence:mailing-list:list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive :sender:list-subscribe:list-unsubscribe:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; bh=le4RiyMIW5esd1q8g59HUVC74sxawUUh05GBrQQXSsk=; b=2ZBfLRYoKSEMUGcwSVfQGoMDHp2CdvUJF5dUIaHfw5FfAP7/iyjqcDY8duwZy/VKha akBaHRQO4otZagOn9rHCEGeWOHLlBbjehbGMipoZ+m2Ssce5ovp5TspihSlKtq4XH+Dz yPLdt5ZQocKeJ2eGTmnJ66nCsdin6L7offnos= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=x-beenthere:received-spf:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date :message-id:subject:from:to:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=xLqittWSe1VRfGz5sWq+/C7/WUwWoF921WWH28X8kVbaztJ/EIvyCYr4PTmGe2wbdn kk4PJDBSnHIRnJm7Dvu+XIBol/JaTF5rHZpkellKhmQ7oaDYW/nofKNtQSR/4p4MFkKd Q3+aDdfJ2xua/XvNX6ocwjYMQydOVDKcfjfpM= Received: by 10.216.145.97 with SMTP id o75mr231634wej.16.1286474350636; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:59:10 -0700 (PDT) X-BeenThere: lojban@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.227.39.10 with SMTP id d10ls160106wbe.2.p; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:59:09 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.227.157.73 with SMTP id a9mr54048wbx.12.1286474349730; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:59:09 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.227.157.73 with SMTP id a9mr54047wbx.12.1286474349710; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:59:09 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail-wy0-f169.google.com (mail-wy0-f169.google.com [74.125.82.169]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTP id a37si875592wba.3.2010.10.07.10.59.08; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:59:08 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of jjllambias@gmail.com designates 74.125.82.169 as permitted sender) client-ip=74.125.82.169; Received: by wyb42 with SMTP id 42so239591wyb.14 for ; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:59:08 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.227.151.148 with SMTP id c20mr1242222wbw.15.1286474347960; Thu, 07 Oct 2010 10:59:07 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.227.145.130 with HTTP; Thu, 7 Oct 2010 10:59:07 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <20101007173227.GB27477@alice.local> References: <20101007173227.GB27477@alice.local> Date: Thu, 7 Oct 2010 14:59:07 -0300 Message-ID: Subject: Re: [lojban] la lojbo kurji From: =?ISO-8859-1?Q?Jorge_Llamb=EDas?= To: lojban@googlegroups.com X-Original-Sender: jjllambias@gmail.com X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of jjllambias@gmail.com designates 74.125.82.169 as permitted sender) smtp.mail=jjllambias@gmail.com; dkim=pass (test mode) header.i=@gmail.com Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: Sender: lojban@googlegroups.com List-Subscribe: , List-Unsubscribe: , Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Thu, Oct 7, 2010 at 2:32 PM, .alyn.post. wrote: > I've written an oath for myself regarding Lojban. =A0This stretched my > fluency a bit, so I'd like some feedback on how I might make it > better. > > =A0ni'o mi me la lojbo kurji > =A0.i mi ca nupre lo za'i go'o kei mi .e la lojbo kurji For an oath "nu'e" is better than "mi ca nupre". You are not reporting that someone (in this case yourself) is making a promise. You are actually making the promise. So "nu'e mi .e la lojbo kurji do'u go'o". > =A0.i mi ba tavla fo la lobjan. de'i lo ro djedi "lo ro djedi" is not a date, you want "ca" not "de'i". And "ca ro (lo) djedi", unless you are content to do it at some single point in time valid for all days. > =A0.i mi ba jmina lo cnino nupre lo vi nupre "Add a new oath-taker to this here oath-taker"? If you mean "a new commitment to this commitment" then its "lo cnino se nupre lo dei se nupre", but maybe you are promising to add adepts, I don't know. > =A0.i ganai mi tavla fi no da de'i lo cabdei gi mi tavla fi lo vi nupre "ca lo cabdei" So, either you talk about something, or you talk about yourself? mu'o mi'e xorxes --=20 You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "= lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. 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