From lojban+bncCJ2UzZHuDRDXp73mBBoEVCCIVQ@googlegroups.com Mon Nov 01 16:57:26 2010 Received: from mail-wy0-f189.google.com ([74.125.82.189]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1PD4Ff-00085u-OK; Mon, 01 Nov 2010 16:57:26 -0700 Received: by wyb38 with SMTP id 38sf3837230wyb.16 for ; Mon, 01 Nov 2010 16:57:17 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:x-beenthere:received:received:received :received:received-spf:received:mime-version:received:received :in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :x-original-sender:x-original-authentication-results:reply-to :precedence:mailing-list:list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive :sender:list-subscribe:list-unsubscribe:content-type; bh=UxD4OzzBsIt0UwbNhAf2WE4fwgNXTEMfZ7S8ME9i5zw=; b=J/ACiUmwgjIUiQ+bxoVULruQaH5AYKSjhlMrhprbPPfVHnXYANLYUNiafFBSKlYuj5 Wm/EG8/abr1wlGm3ZM3C6h1F+PHJ+J2/1dwPP9lwis2Bl01LepnZSNTuQvm9jvElHVQF 8+Kr2SORVSh8u1rD28gXFZWWJVr4VOvrxj61w= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=x-beenthere:received-spf:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date :message-id:subject:from:to:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type; b=wAH62o8Rq7iSJMY/RwK3rH0Ap4LhSKRv1Dc47qS9dMLxOWCyOO98qOulydnhyrSLfp JFqzKdJcTeMNhGRbXMCQwzGiSS3KH7lUa8DEN5ZJa4/AHpwOLxVgZlE3VuIKKfp7Cs8f umdy0cARgTpUpVQgoIgEU34lY0tVfSfcMTP6U= Received: by 10.216.10.65 with SMTP id 43mr79372weu.22.1288655831239; Mon, 01 Nov 2010 16:57:11 -0700 (PDT) X-BeenThere: lojban@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.216.58.143 with SMTP id q15ls2659878wec.1.p; Mon, 01 Nov 2010 16:57:10 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.216.143.134 with SMTP id l6mr16926wej.12.1288655830119; Mon, 01 Nov 2010 16:57:10 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.216.143.134 with SMTP id l6mr16925wej.12.1288655830105; Mon, 01 Nov 2010 16:57:10 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail-ww0-f52.google.com (mail-ww0-f52.google.com [74.125.82.52]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTP id l5si2062249weq.15.2010.11.01.16.57.09; Mon, 01 Nov 2010 16:57:09 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of jjllambias@gmail.com designates 74.125.82.52 as permitted sender) client-ip=74.125.82.52; Received: by wwa36 with SMTP id 36so6407354wwa.33 for ; Mon, 01 Nov 2010 16:57:09 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.227.146.147 with SMTP id h19mr8998520wbv.197.1288655828641; Mon, 01 Nov 2010 16:57:08 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.227.32.140 with HTTP; Mon, 1 Nov 2010 16:57:08 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: References: Date: Mon, 1 Nov 2010 20:57:08 -0300 Message-ID: Subject: Re: [lojban] Another comic (Again!) From: =?ISO-8859-1?Q?Jorge_Llamb=EDas?= To: lojban@googlegroups.com X-Original-Sender: jjllambias@gmail.com X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of jjllambias@gmail.com designates 74.125.82.52 as permitted sender) smtp.mail=jjllambias@gmail.com; dkim=pass (test mode) header.i=@gmail.com Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: Sender: lojban@googlegroups.com List-Subscribe: , List-Unsubscribe: , Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 On Mon, Nov 1, 2010 at 2:33 PM, Remo Dentato wrote: > Another translated comic is ready for your dissection, corrections and > suggestions: http://tinyurl.com/jbo-tusks (1) "snisi'o le ma'a tsali" Do you mean "snisi'o lo nu ma'a tsali"? (2) "ba ma lo bilni sidju ... cu tolyli'a" ".i naku zmadu lo djedi be li re .a li ci" I think the question should be "ba za ma", since he is probably interested in how long it will be until they arrive, not in what may happen before they arrive. I would make the answer "lo djedi be li su'e re ji'i ci" (3) I couldn't figure out "lo sinxa te sazgau". (4) "naku ma'a ba ze'u bandu fi le nu gunta" Maybe "renvi" rather than "bandu"? "ma'a na ba renvi lo nu gunta kei lo clani"? (5) Maybe "le midju _be_ le sorgu'e"? (6) "ba ma da poi pacnu'e ma'a [ku'o] cu denpa": "after what will they wait?" Do you mean "how long will they wait?" That's "ze'a ma". Or "what are they waiting for?" That's "denpa ma" (7) You use "gasnu" where I would use "zukte". "gasnu" is to make someone (usually someone else) do something, "zukte" is just to do something. mu'o mi'e xorxes -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban?hl=en.