From lojban+bncCNTPpI2KGxCviYHoBBoEzFqjmQ@googlegroups.com Wed Dec 08 18:53:54 2010 Received: from mail-pv0-f189.google.com ([74.125.83.189]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1PQWde-0001Ss-EB; Wed, 08 Dec 2010 18:53:53 -0800 Received: by pvh1 with SMTP id 1sf779315pvh.16 for ; Wed, 08 Dec 2010 18:53:40 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:x-beenthere:received:received:received :received:received-spf:x-authority-analysis:x-cloudmark-score :x-originating-ip:received:received:from:to:subject:date:user-agent :references:in-reply-to:mime-version:message-id:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type:content-disposition; bh=H8gyrf4ZSY/HQULyAqWzGAPmBD5DT7boNFNaoZj2Drw=; b=3fAkL/gnhInHzV4OD/73Fws6E4gZrlG0wFm40aFYMvSVUxLeCTb92G/pwXYCc7NBnr tx1iLGDfOAG/GaUKWNoagziou+vIYBqKrq90uRu49VtMCxxZZ0VXtTi6Rmfqkg6jBpbr IvZ2l5zfU5VtNgw9vZpJdNfc+/nIGFxDfH32g= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=x-beenthere:received-spf:x-authority-analysis:x-cloudmark-score :x-originating-ip:from:to:subject:date:user-agent:references :in-reply-to:mime-version:message-id:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type:content-disposition; b=ALBgj7GMqSSUOrz9co8qq4Ru+1v4XzlVx+/XkmCeTBW8kcqUxXiivAmHEzEwFlShVf hJex2XU2Z9lX1G1wHSaLJ44Ta0Z3hAkbc9VPIOtlAZ2evKW2NH42RxnwGnmHXdr6Bs7V kewOzAfRvF05elCM4ThSmuNlTSWIEcfTrBbGw= Received: by 10.142.150.28 with SMTP id x28mr497292wfd.7.1291863215552; Wed, 08 Dec 2010 18:53:35 -0800 (PST) X-BeenThere: lojban@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.142.6.9 with SMTP id 9ls2242433wff.3.p; Wed, 08 Dec 2010 18:53:33 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.142.142.5 with SMTP id p5mr6229847wfd.3.1291863213953; Wed, 08 Dec 2010 18:53:33 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.142.142.5 with SMTP id p5mr6229845wfd.3.1291863213931; Wed, 08 Dec 2010 18:53:33 -0800 (PST) Received: from cdptpa-omtalb.mail.rr.com (cdptpa-omtalb.mail.rr.com [75.180.132.120]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTP id n6si1484343wfl.7.2010.12.08.18.53.33; Wed, 08 Dec 2010 18:53:33 -0800 (PST) Received-SPF: neutral (google.com: 75.180.132.120 is neither permitted nor denied by best guess record for domain of phma@phma.optus.nu) client-ip=75.180.132.120; X-Authority-Analysis: v=1.1 cv=uESSSoDEku2quKX/oFXS2Smn5+55LTFcWFr5T5T8nFs= c=1 sm=0 a=jeYHDf34nW4A:10 a=wPDyFdB5xvgA:10 a=8nJEP1OIZ-IA:10 a=9o99xeNKNPYSmM5t9x5+TQ==:17 a=sIjASDoaAAAA:8 a=8YJikuA2AAAA:8 a=gdpcEB_FS9jN_RJ0918A:9 a=-sZNzJ2a3LJG9AMAdVwA:7 a=4q90W52YTIKmVVj11keL-NNstFMA:4 a=wPNLvfGTeEIA:10 a=Xy1d2M_JUfAA:10 a=9o99xeNKNPYSmM5t9x5+TQ==:117 X-Cloudmark-Score: 0 X-Originating-IP: 75.176.118.168 Received: from [75.176.118.168] ([75.176.118.168:53250] helo=chausie) by cdptpa-oedge01.mail.rr.com (envelope-from ) (ecelerity 2.2.3.46 r()) with ESMTP id 6D/C7-07087-DA4400D4; Thu, 09 Dec 2010 02:53:33 +0000 Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by chausie (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6FC925813 for ; Wed, 8 Dec 2010 21:53:29 -0500 (EST) From: Pierre Abbat To: lojban@googlegroups.com Subject: Re: [lojban] Another children's book Date: Wed, 8 Dec 2010 21:53:26 -0500 User-Agent: KMail/1.9.6 (enterprise 0.20070907.709405) References: In-Reply-To: MIME-Version: 1.0 Message-Id: <201012082153.27873.phma@phma.optus.nu> X-Original-Sender: phma@phma.optus.nu X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; spf=neutral (google.com: 75.180.132.120 is neither permitted nor denied by best guess record for domain of phma@phma.optus.nu) smtp.mail=phma@phma.optus.nu Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: Sender: lojban@googlegroups.com List-Subscribe: , List-Unsubscribe: , Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Disposition: inline On Wednesday 08 December 2010 16:01:20 Remo Dentato wrote: > I've posted the initial translation of another children book here: > http://www.dentato.com/dinsauru-review.pdf > > I'm still waiting for the author to give me the authorization to post > the translation on the lojban.org site but in the meantime any > feedback is greatly welcome. I agree with xorxes on the name. Also the first name could be "djil", "gil", or "xil", depending on what it's short for and in what language. "lenu ponse lo dinsauru" means you have a specific event of owning in mind, but you don't have a specific dinosaur to own, which doesn't make sense. Both articles should be "lo". 4: Does "ri" refer to the dinosaur or to the event of owning it? The event starts first in the text but finishes second. 8: "brakiosaurus" or "braxiosaurus"? 9: I'd say "lo bende be lo me la paxicefalosaurus." IIRR the standard thing to do with "ce" or "ci" when Lojbanizing a scientific name is to leave the "c" as it is, but the online refgram had the table mangled. 11: should it be "trodon" or "tro'odon" or "tro,odon"? Pierre -- li ze te'a ci vu'u ci bi'e te'a mu du li ci su'i ze te'a mu bi'e vu'u ci -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. 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