From lojban+bncCOjSjrXVGBCypLvqBBoE4HCGBw@googlegroups.com Sun Feb 06 08:54:27 2011 Received: from mail-yw0-f61.google.com ([209.85.213.61]) by chain.digitalkingdom.org with esmtp (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1Pm7sU-0005hG-T0; Sun, 06 Feb 2011 08:54:26 -0800 Received: by ywh1 with SMTP id 1sf2671464ywh.16 for ; Sun, 06 Feb 2011 08:54:16 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:x-beenthere:received-spf:mime-version :in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :x-original-sender:x-original-authentication-results:reply-to :precedence:mailing-list:list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive :sender:list-subscribe:list-unsubscribe:content-type; bh=C1HGlOVOX9Ojxu5z0qV0EKpiX4K1LcGqTnveI89QIMs=; b=f0VltH2CMdS5iRO+c28I/FpM1Hu6Lt1FSCCHLb0BfbGYIBm7Rmy8tMHgKGCkwVpKQF N5+DF8vsnD+zndXKLV/63Rsm1/cEPM7AKNt/L1QRdyY8cvySUkvxbDhet/m63NGxPNp4 8oCWJtby1QDbRTfC4ewqkUODDUEtW3DeFkpV8= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=googlegroups.com; s=beta; h=x-beenthere:received-spf:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date :message-id:subject:from:to:x-original-sender :x-original-authentication-results:reply-to:precedence:mailing-list :list-id:list-post:list-help:list-archive:sender:list-subscribe :list-unsubscribe:content-type; b=dh8CttkDGLp1o8aDB9EhSCu0wjWDlJoebyz1NJzb6uvjupgh8zdaxXW0jE7WibGbrl SqDZo5Rmvi5ovi4K25Su3qSVZk1gZmidX8tbTO3Kfv0KPpki74ui2mrJrgwx0ttkyogy 9arGlT6+AfPqN04hCNQjYj7PqJh95tG5+sU+E= Received: by 10.146.84.11 with SMTP id h11mr162858yab.18.1297011250159; Sun, 06 Feb 2011 08:54:10 -0800 (PST) X-BeenThere: lojban@googlegroups.com Received: by 10.231.76.165 with SMTP id c37ls2327426ibk.3.p; Sun, 06 Feb 2011 08:54:09 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.231.200.129 with SMTP id ew1mr6338622ibb.0.1297011249204; Sun, 06 Feb 2011 08:54:09 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.231.200.129 with SMTP id ew1mr6338621ibb.0.1297011249171; Sun, 06 Feb 2011 08:54:09 -0800 (PST) Received: from mail-iw0-f182.google.com (mail-iw0-f182.google.com [209.85.214.182]) by gmr-mx.google.com with ESMTPS id c4si413752ict.0.2011.02.06.08.54.08 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Sun, 06 Feb 2011 08:54:08 -0800 (PST) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of lukeabergen@gmail.com designates 209.85.214.182 as permitted sender) client-ip=209.85.214.182; Received: by mail-iw0-f182.google.com with SMTP id 39so4060722iwn.27 for ; Sun, 06 Feb 2011 08:54:08 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.231.160.80 with SMTP id m16mr16073276ibx.106.1297011247495; Sun, 06 Feb 2011 08:54:07 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.231.199.19 with HTTP; Sun, 6 Feb 2011 08:54:07 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: References: Date: Sun, 6 Feb 2011 11:54:07 -0500 Message-ID: Subject: Re: [lojban] Translating another comic From: Luke Bergen To: lojban@googlegroups.com X-Original-Sender: lukeabergen@gmail.com X-Original-Authentication-Results: gmr-mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of lukeabergen@gmail.com designates 209.85.214.182 as permitted sender) smtp.mail=lukeabergen@gmail.com; dkim=pass (test mode) header.i=@gmail.com Reply-To: lojban@googlegroups.com Precedence: list Mailing-list: list lojban@googlegroups.com; contact lojban+owners@googlegroups.com List-ID: List-Post: , List-Help: , List-Archive: Sender: lojban@googlegroups.com List-Subscribe: , List-Unsubscribe: , Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=005045016627ad3a54049b9ff6cd --005045016627ad3a54049b9ff6cd Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Only took a cursory glance (have to head out shortly) but... In the bottom right panel of the first page I suspect that you meant to say "xamgu mukti" not "kamgu mukti" On Sun, Feb 6, 2011 at 7:04 AM, Remo Dentato wrote: > I just started translating a new comic and I'd appreciate your feedback. > > I posted a draft for revision here: > http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7681579/pojbihe.pdf > > Just the first two comic panel has been translated (and the cover, and the > last page). > > Comments and suggestion are really welcome! > > remod. > > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > "lojban" group. > To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > lojban+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. > For more options, visit this group at > http://groups.google.com/group/lojban?hl=en. > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "lojban" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban?hl=en. --005045016627ad3a54049b9ff6cd Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1 Only took a cursory glance (have to head out shortly) but...
In the bottom right panel of the first page I suspect that you meant to say "xamgu mukti" not "kamgu mukti"

On Sun, Feb 6, 2011 at 7:04 AM, Remo Dentato <rdentato@gmail.com> wrote:
I just started translating a new comic and I'd appreciate your feedback.

I posted a draft for revision here: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7681579/pojbihe.pdf

Just the first two comic panel has been translated (and the cover, and the last page).

Comments and suggestion are really welcome!

remod.


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