From: jkominek@miranda.org
Date: Thu, 17 Nov 2005 21:12:37 -0700
To: lojban-beginners@lojban.org
Subject: [lojban-beginners] Re: I've written a wikipedia article
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On Fri, Nov 18, 2005 at 04:54:27AM +0100, sunnan@handgranat.org wrote:
> It's more of a stub than an article, it's only three sentences.
> 
> Corrections and comments are very welcome. It's at
> http://jbo.wikipedia.org/wiki/la_pacruxydinj

The article name shouldn't start with "la". (How many others do, after
all?)  Further, "Castlevania" is a name which doesn't really have any
inherent meaning, so you should have been Lojbanizing it, rather than
making a lujvo-name. And the first place of cmene (and thus the me'e
modal) wants quoted text, not a reference to a person. So you want
zoi, not la'o.

(And, personally, I'm not a fan of sel+rafsi. You're gaining like,
what, one letter? Maybe a syllable? And then we've got to know all the
rafsi. Blah.)

-- 
Jay Kominek <jkominek@miranda.org>