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Fine by me. I have no problems with any of your suggestions, except maybe
the "???" one. :)

On Sat, May 1, 2010 at 6:10 PM, Kevin Reid <kpreid@mac.com> wrote:

> I propose to change the English text for the following gismu place items in
> the "Lojban gismu" smart.fm goal as follows:
>
>  lo se djica   something desired => a state desired
>
>    To emphasize that lo se djica is not a physical object.
>
>
>  lo te troci   a method of trial => a method tried
>
>    The existing wording sounds like "a method of testing", not
>    "the way we tried to do it".
>
>
>  lo se troci   something tried => ???
>
>    This seems misleading in that it sounds like "I tried a new food"
>    or similar. "something tried for" would be better, but I don't quite
>    like it.
>
>
>  lo te jimpe   a subject of something understood =>
>                    a subject understood about
>
>    Trying to make the relation clearer.
>
>
> Please let me know if you disapprove of these changes.
>
> --
> Kevin Reid                                  <http://switchb.org/kpreid/>
>
>
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Fine by me. I have no problems with any of your suggestions, except maybe t=
he &quot;???&quot; one. :)<br><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Sat, May 1,=
 2010 at 6:10 PM, Kevin Reid <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:kpreid=
@mac.com">kpreid@mac.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; borde=
r-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); padding-left: 1ex;">I propose to chan=
ge the English text for the following gismu place items in the &quot;Lojban=
 gismu&quot; <a href=3D"http://smart.fm" target=3D"_blank">smart.fm</a> goa=
l as follows:<br>

<br>
 =A0lo se djica =A0 something desired =3D&gt; a state desired<br>
<br>
 =A0 =A0To emphasize that lo se djica is not a physical object.<br>
<br>
<br>
 =A0lo te troci =A0 a method of trial =3D&gt; a method tried<br>
<br>
 =A0 =A0The existing wording sounds like &quot;a method of testing&quot;, n=
ot<br>
 =A0 =A0&quot;the way we tried to do it&quot;.<br>
<br>
<br>
 =A0lo se troci =A0 something tried =3D&gt; ???<br>
<br>
 =A0 =A0This seems misleading in that it sounds like &quot;I tried a new fo=
od&quot;<br>
 =A0 =A0or similar. &quot;something tried for&quot; would be better, but I =
don&#39;t quite<br>
 =A0 =A0like it.<br>
<br>
<br>
 =A0lo te jimpe =A0 a subject of something understood =3D&gt;<br>
 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0a subject understood about<br>
<br>
 =A0 =A0Trying to make the relation clearer.<br>
<br>
<br>
Please let me know if you disapprove of these changes.<br>
<br>
-- <br>
Kevin Reid =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =
=A0&lt;<a href=3D"http://switchb.org/kpreid/" target=3D"_blank">http://swit=
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