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Subject: Re: [lojban-beginners] Proposed change to smart.fm items
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I believe that you'll need the lojban_upload users password in order to
actually do the editing. If so, contact either myself or Robin directly to
get it.

On Sat, May 1, 2010 at 8:02 PM, Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com> wrote:

> Fine by me. I have no problems with any of your suggestions, except maybe
> the "???" one. :)
>
>
> On Sat, May 1, 2010 at 6:10 PM, Kevin Reid <kpreid@mac.com> wrote:
>
>> I propose to change the English text for the following gismu place items
>> in the "Lojban gismu" smart.fm goal as follows:
>>
>>  lo se djica   something desired => a state desired
>>
>>    To emphasize that lo se djica is not a physical object.
>>
>>
>>  lo te troci   a method of trial => a method tried
>>
>>    The existing wording sounds like "a method of testing", not
>>    "the way we tried to do it".
>>
>>
>>  lo se troci   something tried => ???
>>
>>    This seems misleading in that it sounds like "I tried a new food"
>>    or similar. "something tried for" would be better, but I don't quite
>>    like it.
>>
>>
>>  lo te jimpe   a subject of something understood =>
>>                    a subject understood about
>>
>>    Trying to make the relation clearer.
>>
>>
>> Please let me know if you disapprove of these changes.
>>
>> --
>> Kevin Reid                                  <http://switchb.org/kpreid/>
>>
>>
>>
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>
>
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I believe that you&#39;ll need the lojban_upload users password in order to=
 actually do the editing. If so, contact either myself or Robin directly to=
 get it.<br><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Sat, May 1, 2010 at 8:02 PM, =
Jonathan Jones <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:eyeonus@gmail.com">e=
yeonus@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; borde=
r-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); padding-left: 1ex;">Fine by me. I hav=
e no problems with any of your suggestions, except maybe the &quot;???&quot=
; one. :)<div>
<div></div><div class=3D"h5"><br><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Sat, May=
 1, 2010 at 6:10 PM, Kevin Reid <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:kpr=
eid@mac.com" target=3D"_blank">kpreid@mac.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; borde=
r-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); padding-left: 1ex;">I propose to chan=
ge the English text for the following gismu place items in the &quot;Lojban=
 gismu&quot; <a href=3D"http://smart.fm" target=3D"_blank">smart.fm</a> goa=
l as follows:<br>


<br>
 =A0lo se djica =A0 something desired =3D&gt; a state desired<br>
<br>
 =A0 =A0To emphasize that lo se djica is not a physical object.<br>
<br>
<br>
 =A0lo te troci =A0 a method of trial =3D&gt; a method tried<br>
<br>
 =A0 =A0The existing wording sounds like &quot;a method of testing&quot;, n=
ot<br>
 =A0 =A0&quot;the way we tried to do it&quot;.<br>
<br>
<br>
 =A0lo se troci =A0 something tried =3D&gt; ???<br>
<br>
 =A0 =A0This seems misleading in that it sounds like &quot;I tried a new fo=
od&quot;<br>
 =A0 =A0or similar. &quot;something tried for&quot; would be better, but I =
don&#39;t quite<br>
 =A0 =A0like it.<br>
<br>
<br>
 =A0lo te jimpe =A0 a subject of something understood =3D&gt;<br>
 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0a subject understood about<br>
<br>
 =A0 =A0Trying to make the relation clearer.<br>
<br>
<br>
Please let me know if you disapprove of these changes.<br>
<br>
-- <br>
Kevin Reid =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =
=A0&lt;<a href=3D"http://switchb.org/kpreid/" target=3D"_blank">http://swit=
chb.org/kpreid/</a>&gt;<br><font color=3D"#888888">
<br>
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