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Reading through it now.  I'll let the pro's pick out the grammatical issues
that I'm sure I've read past.  I did find a couple of  typo's though.

On page 19 I think you mean {xasyjukni} not {xaysjukni}.
On page 24 I think you mean {ganlo} not {ganlu}

I really enjoyed it.  I didn't even read the English version because I
believe I understood most of the lojban (if stuff was wrong I got the idea
of it without noticing grammatical error).

Nice work.  Please continue with these translations.  Where are you getting
them from?  I'd like to try my hand at some translating and the community
could always use more works (especially vercukta, IMO).

On Sun, Sep 12, 2010 at 5:08 PM, Remo Dentato <rdentato@gmail.com> wrote:

> I've a first draft of the translation for a new jbove'a cukta.  The
> title is "The Brave Monkey Pirate"
>
> This is much more complex than the first on I made, so I expect to
> find a lot of mistakes in this draft. Some of the pages were above my
> level, I hope I've been able to render them more or less.
>
> You can find the translation here:
>     http://www.dentato.com/the-brave-monkey-pirate-jbo-review.pdf
>
> It would be interesting for me to know how much of it is
> understandable without looking at the original which is here:
>   http://bluebison.net/books/monkey-pirate/pps/the-brave-monkey-pirate.pps
>
> (note that the powerpoint presentation has one page more than the PDF
> version at
> http://bluebison.net/books/monkey-pirate/the-brave-monkey-pirate.pdf,
> that's why I started from that one).
>
> Thanks for you corrections, comments and feedback.
>
> Remo
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Reading through it now. =A0I&#39;ll let the pro&#39;s pick out the grammati=
cal issues that I&#39;m sure I&#39;ve read past. =A0I did find a couple of =
=A0typo&#39;s though.<div><br><div>On page 19 I think you mean {xasyjukni} =
not {xaysjukni}.</div>
<div>On page 24 I think you mean {ganlo} not {ganlu}</div><div><br></div><d=
iv>I really enjoyed it. =A0I didn&#39;t even read the English version becau=
se I believe I understood most of the lojban (if stuff was wrong I got the =
idea of it without noticing grammatical error).</div>
<div><br></div><div>Nice work. =A0Please continue with these translations. =
=A0Where are you getting them from? =A0I&#39;d like to try my hand at some =
translating and the community could always use more works (especially vercu=
kta, IMO).</div>
<div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Sun, Sep 12, 2010 at 5:08 PM, Remo D=
entato <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:rdentato@gmail.com">rdentato=
@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=
=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex;">
I&#39;ve a first draft of the translation for a new jbove&#39;a cukta. =A0T=
he<br>
title is &quot;The Brave Monkey Pirate&quot;<br>
<br>
This is much more complex than the first on I made, so I expect to<br>
find a lot of mistakes in this draft. Some of the pages were above my<br>
level, I hope I&#39;ve been able to render them more or less.<br>
<br>
You can find the translation here:<br>
 =A0 =A0 <a href=3D"http://www.dentato.com/the-brave-monkey-pirate-jbo-revi=
ew.pdf" target=3D"_blank">http://www.dentato.com/the-brave-monkey-pirate-jb=
o-review.pdf</a><br>
<br>
It would be interesting for me to know how much of it is<br>
understandable without looking at the original which is here:<br>
 =A0 <a href=3D"http://bluebison.net/books/monkey-pirate/pps/the-brave-monk=
ey-pirate.pps" target=3D"_blank">http://bluebison.net/books/monkey-pirate/p=
ps/the-brave-monkey-pirate.pps</a><br>
<br>
(note that the powerpoint presentation has one page more than the PDF<br>
version at <a href=3D"http://bluebison.net/books/monkey-pirate/the-brave-mo=
nkey-pirate.pdf" target=3D"_blank">http://bluebison.net/books/monkey-pirate=
/the-brave-monkey-pirate.pdf</a>,<br>
that&#39;s why I started from that one).<br>
<br>
Thanks for you corrections, comments and feedback.<br>
<br>
Remo<br>
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