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Subject: [lojban-beginners] [update] le virnu smani blozeile'a
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I posted a new version of "le virnu smani blozeile'a" here:

   http://dentato.com/the-brave-monkey-pirate-jbo-review.pdf

I hope I addressed all the comments you gave me.

I'm sure there are still mistakes and things to be fixed, thanks for
any comment you may have.

Remo.

PS. crab is "braxiura" now :)

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