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On Sat, Oct 1, 2011 at 1:43 AM, gleki <gleki.is.my.name@gmail.com> wrote:

> The second song definitely needs a lot of fixes.
>
> Here is "lo melbi balvi", VERSION 4
>
> tirna fa mi fe lo melbi balvi voksa
> ku noi jbini fe lo cerni dirgo ku
> .i da voksa .ije du'i lo nu vofli
> ku lo trina pluta ku macri'a mi
>
> .i doi lo melbi balvi
> ku ko fe mi na jursa
> .i pe'u doi darbalvi
> ko jimpe fi mi
> .i fe lo klina krasi
> ku fi lo melbi balvi
> ku mi fi lo darbalvi
>
As it stands, the speaker falls in the 4th place of {klama}; fortunately,
{fa mi fi lo darbalvi} fixes that without breaking rhythm.

> ku ca'o klama vi
>
> .i mi tirna fe lo melbi balvi voksa
> ku noi klacpe lo tcemanci stuzi ku
>
I probably should have noticed this before, but {lo tcemanci stuzi} needs to
be in the third place of {klacpe}; otherwise, it's the thing that the voice
is summoning, not the place the voice is summoning to.

> gi'e preti cusku .a'esai lo su'u
>
Bear in mind that it is the speaker expressing alertness; not the voice

> mi pu zukte ma lo balvi zmadu ku
>
> .i mi nupre lo nu mi ba vrude zmadu
> gi'e ro roi sidju lo mi pendo ku
> .i da voksa .ije sutra klama fa mi
> fo lo klama prina claxu pluta ku
>

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<br><br><div class=3D"gmail_quote">On Sat, Oct 1, 2011 at 1:43 AM, gleki <s=
pan dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mailto:gleki.is.my.name@gmail.com">gleki.is.=
my.name@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote=
" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex;">
The second song definitely needs a lot of fixes.<div><br></div><div>Here is=
 &quot;lo melbi balvi&quot;, VERSION 4</div><div><br></div><div><div class=
=3D"im"><div>tirna fa mi fe lo melbi balvi voksa</div></div><div class=3D"i=
m">
<div>ku noi jbini fe lo cerni dirgo ku</div></div><div>.i da voksa .ije du&=
#39;i lo nu vofli</div><div>ku lo trina pluta ku macri&#39;a mi</div><div c=
lass=3D"im"><div><br></div><div>.i doi lo melbi balvi</div></div><div>ku ko=
 fe mi na jursa</div>
<div>.i pe&#39;u doi darbalvi</div><div>ko jimpe fi mi</div><div class=3D"i=
m"><div>.i fe lo klina krasi</div><div>ku fi lo melbi balvi</div><div>ku mi=
 fi lo darbalvi</div></div></div></blockquote><div>As it stands, the speake=
r falls in the 4th place of {klama}; fortunately, {fa mi fi lo darbalvi} fi=
xes that without breaking rhythm.<br>
</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex;=
 border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); padding-left: 1ex;"><div><div>k=
u ca&#39;o klama vi</div><div><br></div><div>.i mi tirna fe lo melbi balvi =
voksa</div>
<div class=3D"im"><div>ku noi klacpe lo tcemanci stuzi ku</div></div></div>=
</blockquote><div>I probably should have noticed this before, but {lo tcema=
nci stuzi} needs to be in the third place of {klacpe}; otherwise, it&#39;s =
the thing that the voice is summoning, not the place the voice is summoning=
 to. <br>
</div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex;=
 border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); padding-left: 1ex;"><div><div c=
lass=3D"im"><div>gi&#39;e preti cusku .a&#39;esai lo su&#39;u</div></div></=
div>
</blockquote><div>Bear in mind that it is the speaker expressing alertness;=
 not the voice<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin: =
0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); padding-left:=
 1ex;">
<div><div class=3D"im"><div>mi pu zukte ma lo balvi zmadu ku</div><div><br>=
</div></div><div>.i mi nupre lo nu mi ba vrude zmadu</div><div>gi&#39;e ro =
roi sidju lo mi pendo ku</div><div class=3D"im"><div>.i da voksa .ije sutra=
 klama fa mi</div>
</div><div>fo lo klama prina claxu pluta ku</div></div></blockquote><blockq=
uote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; border-left:=
 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); padding-left: 1ex;"><div class=3D"im"><div><=
br>
</div>

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