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One query though, lo mivyskera'a je zbaskera'a po do This section of the cll (http://dag.github.com/cll/14/12/) seems to suggest that this would be a thing or things that are both technologically and biologically intrinsic to you. Perhaps {ja} would capture the things that are one or the other (or both). ie lo X .e lo Y = lo X ja Y mu'o mi'e ros On 24 June 2012 15:14, Devin Prater wrote: > Oh, I am not discouraged. I just need to learn a bit more about the > language and how it works more, and practice thinking more logically, > I'm thinking about the "ship" thing now, I can't believe I called a > starship a boat. I think translating things like this is a sort of > creativity, because breaking things down from English words to what > they truly are takes much creativeness, there doesn't seem to be many > word-to-word translations from English to Lojban, well not many in > this case anyways. Thanks for your help and guidance. > > On 6/23/12, Jonathan Jones wrote: > > Certainly. I'll try to remember to do so. > > > > to pu benji ti fo lo mi me la.android. fonxa toi > > mu'o mi'e.aionys. > > On Jun 23, 2012 10:27 PM, ".arpis." wrote: > > > >> ki'e sai .aionys. > >> > >> I found that extremely informative and would appreciate any similar > >> description for future translations you do that you are willing to > >> provide. > >> .i mi mutce se jungau gi'e ba da'i ckire tu'a lo simsa velski be lo nu > >> ba xe fanva ku ku poi do nalpro fi lo nu sabji > >> > >> On Sat, Jun 23, 2012 at 11:34 PM, Jonathan Jones > >> wrote: > >> > That's actually the reason behind me going through my thought process, > >> > rather than merely submitting my translation. This is not the first > >> > translation project I've attempted, nor likely the last, so I have > some > >> > experience in hte hidden difficulties that lie within. > >> > > >> > > >> > On Sat, Jun 23, 2012 at 8:59 PM, Devin Prater > > >> > wrote: > >> >> > >> >> Wow. You've given me some insight on the translation process, that I > >> >> shouldn't translate just the words, but the true meaning, which is a > >> >> little tricky sometimes, like with lower your shields. I think I > >> >> should learn more Lojban before tackling things like this, I thought > >> >> this would be quite simple. > >> >> > >> >> On 6/23/12, Jonathan Jones wrote: > >> >> > I made a rather annoying mistake. I completely forgot to separate > >> >> > the > >> >> > two > >> >> > sentences. There needs to be an {.i} in there. > >> >> > > >> >> > {mi'a selcme zo.borg. *.i* ko sisti lonu nensabji lo nencalku kei > >> >> > gi'e > >> >> > radydu'a lo do keslo'i} > >> >> > > >> >> > -- > >> >> > mu'o mi'e .aionys. > >> >> > > >> >> > .i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do > zo'o > >> >> > (Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D ) > >> >> > > >> >> > -- > >> >> > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google > >> >> > Groups > >> >> > "Lojban Beginners" group. > >> >> > To post to this group, send email to > >> lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com. > >> >> > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > >> >> > lojban-beginners+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. > >> >> > For more options, visit this group at > >> >> > http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beginners?hl=en. > >> >> > > >> >> > > >> >> > >> >> -- > >> >> You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google > >> Groups > >> >> "Lojban Beginners" group. > >> >> To post to this group, send email to > >> >> lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com. > >> >> To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > >> >> lojban-beginners+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. > >> >> For more options, visit this group at > >> >> http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beginners?hl=en. > >> >> > >> > > >> > > >> > > >> > -- > >> > mu'o mi'e .aionys. > >> > > >> > .i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do zo'o > >> > (Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D ) > >> > > >> > -- > >> > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google > >> > Groups > >> > "Lojban Beginners" group. > >> > To post to this group, send email to > lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com. > >> > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > >> > lojban-beginners+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. > >> > For more options, visit this group at > >> > http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beginners?hl=en. > >> > >> > >> > >> -- > >> mu'o mi'e .arpis. > >> > >> -- > >> You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google > Groups > >> "Lojban Beginners" group. > >> To post to this group, send email to lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com. > >> To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > >> lojban-beginners+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. > >> For more options, visit this group at > >> http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beginners?hl=en. > >> > >> > > > > -- > > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > > "Lojban Beginners" group. > > To post to this group, send email to lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com. > > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > > lojban-beginners+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. > > For more options, visit this group at > > http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beginners?hl=en. > > > > > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > "Lojban Beginners" group. > To post to this group, send email to lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com. > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > lojban-beginners+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. > For more options, visit this group at > http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beginners?hl=en. > > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Lojban Beginners" group. To post to this group, send email to lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to lojban-beginners+unsubscribe@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beginners?hl=en. --f46d043be0d60d75f204c36cd0c8 Content-Type: text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Excellent run through of the translation process.

One query though,<= br>lo mivyskera'a je zbaskera'a po do
This section of the cll (<= a href=3D"http://dag.github.com/cll/14/12/" target=3D"_blank">http://dag.gi= thub.com/cll/14/12/) seems to suggest that this would be a thing or thi= ngs that are both technologically and biologically intrinsic to you. Perhap= s {ja} would capture the things that are one or the other (or both).

ie lo X .e lo Y =3D lo X ja Y

mu'o mi'e ros

On 24 June 2012 15:14, Devin Prater <r.d.t.prat= er@gmail.com> wrote:
Oh, I am not discouraged. I just need to lea= rn a bit more about the
language and how it works more, and practice thinking more logically,
I'm thinking about the "ship" thing now, I can't believe = I called a
starship a boat. I think translating things like this is a sort of
creativity, because breaking things down from English words to what
they truly are takes much creativeness, there doesn't seem to be many word-to-word translations from English to Lojban, well not many in
this case anyways. Thanks for your help and guidance.

On 6/23/12, Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com> wrote:
> Certainly. I'll try to remember to do so.
>
> to pu benji ti fo lo mi me la.android. fonxa toi
> mu'o mi'e.aionys.
> On Jun 23, 2012 10:27 PM, ".arpis." <rpglover64+jbobau@gmail.com<= /a>> wrote:
>
>> ki'e sai .aionys.
>>
>> I found that extremely informative and would appreciate any simila= r
>> description for future translations you do that you are willing to=
>> provide.
>> .i mi mutce se jungau gi'e ba da'i ckire tu'a lo simsa= velski be lo nu
>> ba xe fanva ku ku poi do nalpro fi lo nu sabji
>>
>> On Sat, Jun 23, 2012 at 11:34 PM, Jonathan Jones <
eyeonus@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>> > That's actually the reason behind me going through my tho= ught process,
>> > rather than merely submitting my translation. This is not the= first
>> > translation project I've attempted, nor likely the last, = so I have some
>> > experience in hte hidden difficulties that lie within.
>> >
>> >
>> > On Sat, Jun 23, 2012 at 8:59 PM, Devin Prater <r.d.t.prater@gmail.com= >
>> > wrote:
>> >>
>> >> Wow. You've given me some insight on the translation = process, that I
>> >> shouldn't translate just the words, but the true mean= ing, which is a
>> >> little tricky sometimes, like with lower your shields. I = think I
>> >> should learn more Lojban before tackling things like this= , I thought
>> >> this would be quite simple.
>> >>
>> >> On 6/23/12, Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> > I made a rather annoying mistake. I completely forgo= t to separate
>> >> > the
>> >> > two
>> >> > sentences. There needs to be an {.i} in there.
>> >> >
>> >> > {mi'a selcme zo.borg. *.i* ko sisti lonu nensabj= i lo nencalku kei
>> >> > gi'e
>> >> > radydu'a lo do keslo'i}
>> >> >
>> >> > --
>> >> > mu'o mi'e .aionys.
>> >> >
>> >> > .i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.l= uk. mi patfu do zo'o
>> >> > (Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )<= br> >> >> >
>> >> > --
>> >> > You received this message because you are subscribed= to the Google
>> >> > Groups
>> >> > "Lojban Beginners" group.
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>> lojban-beginners@googlegroups.com.
>> >> > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to
>> >> > lojban-beginners+unsubscribe@googlegroups.= com.
>> >> > For more options, visit this group at
>> >> > http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beg= inners?hl=3Den.
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >>
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http://groups.google.com/group/lojban-beginner= s?hl=3Den.
>> >>
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > --
>> > mu'o mi'e .aionys.
>> >
>> > .i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi pa= tfu do zo'o
>> > (Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )
>> >
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>>
>>
>>
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