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coi manti

It's nice to see new people joining in on these.

Further, not only do I see nothing wrong with your haiku, I think that they
are very good from an artistic standpoint. I especially like the second one.

It's too bad that "arrive" doesn't have a gismu, because tolyli'a is too
many syllables and klama is potentially confusing, but that's a fault of
the language, not the author.

On Mon, Jan 7, 2013 at 6:52 AM, manti <wakkawalross@gmail.com> wrote:

> Felt as though I should try writing a few, probably messed something up
> seeing as this is pretty much my first Lojban ever, but whatever.
>
> loi so'i cribe
> cu denpa lo nu klama
> fa lo rau finpe
>
> The many bears
> wait for the coming
> of enough fish
>
> doi la .skami. .io
> do gasnu .uanai ma .i
> do spofu gau do
>
> Mr. Computer
> What are you doing?
> You're breaking yourself
>
>
> On Sunday, January 6, 2013 6:17:04 AM UTC-6, aionys wrote:
>>
>> Firstly, for anyone who's interested in Haiku in general, there's a huge
>> amount of (English) Haiku at http://www.haiku.com/
>>
>> So, this week's APE is to write a haiku in Lojban.
>>
>> Haiku are normally about nature, but all we're going to care about is
>> that it's in three lines; a line of 5 syllables, a line of 7 syllables, and
>> a final line of 5 syllables.
>>
>> Lojban seems to me to be a language especially suited to haiku, so I
>> imagine this APE will be especially fun one.
>>
>> I made the effort of making both the English translation and the Lojban
>> be haiku,  but the rest of you don't have to if the English is difficult to
>> fit into haiku:
>>
>> co'a lo vensa
>> lo cifxrula ba banro
>> ja'e lo nunmle
>>
>> when the spring begins
>> the flower buds will blossom
>> and so comes beauty
>>
>> --
>> mu'o mi'e .aionys.
>>
>> .i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do zo'o
>> (Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )
>>
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coi manti<br><br>It&#39;s nice to see new people joining in on these.<br><b=
r>Further, not only do I see nothing wrong with your haiku, I think that th=
ey are very good from an artistic standpoint. I especially like the second =
one.<br>
<br>It&#39;s too bad that &quot;arrive&quot; doesn&#39;t have a gismu, beca=
use tolyli&#39;a is too many syllables and klama is potentially confusing, =
but that&#39;s a fault of the language, not the author.<br><br><div class=
=3D"gmail_quote">
On Mon, Jan 7, 2013 at 6:52 AM, manti <span dir=3D"ltr">&lt;<a href=3D"mail=
to:wakkawalross@gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">wakkawalross@gmail.com</a>&gt;=
</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0 0 0 .=
8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
Felt as though I should try writing a few, probably messed something up see=
ing as this is pretty much my first Lojban ever, but whatever.<br><br>loi s=
o&#39;i cribe<br>cu denpa lo nu klama<br>fa lo rau finpe<br><br>The many be=
ars<br>
wait for the coming<br>of enough fish <br><br>doi la .skami. .io<br>do gasn=
u .uanai ma .i<br>do spofu gau do<br><br>Mr. Computer<br>What are you doing=
?<br>You&#39;re breaking yourself<div class=3D"HOEnZb"><div class=3D"h5"><b=
r>
<br>On Sunday, January 6, 2013 6:17:04 AM UTC-6, aionys wrote:<blockquote c=
lass=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0;margin-left:0.8ex;border-left:1px #c=
cc solid;padding-left:1ex">Firstly, for anyone who&#39;s interested in Haik=
u in general, there&#39;s a huge amount of (English) Haiku at <a href=3D"ht=
tp://www.haiku.com/" target=3D"_blank">http://www.haiku.com/</a><br>
<br>So, this week&#39;s APE is to write a haiku in Lojban.<br>
<br>Haiku are normally about nature, but all we&#39;re going to care about =
is that it&#39;s in three lines; a line of 5 syllables, a line of 7 syllabl=
es, and a final line of 5 syllables.<br><br>Lojban seems to me to be a lang=
uage especially suited to haiku, so I imagine this APE will be especially f=
un one.<br>

<br>I made the effort of making both the English translation and the Lojban=
 be haiku,=A0 but the rest of you don&#39;t have to if the English is diffi=
cult to fit into haiku:<br><br>co&#39;a lo vensa<br>lo cifxrula ba banro<br=
>

ja&#39;e lo nunmle<br><br>when the spring begins<br>the flower buds will bl=
ossom<br>and so comes beauty<br clear=3D"all"><br>-- <br>mu&#39;o mi&#39;e =
.aionys.<br><br>.i.e&#39;ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi =
patfu do zo&#39;o<br>

(Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )<br>
</blockquote>

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