melbi mutce doi guskant .i pa selcpe zo'u pe'u do = ko jongau lo selci'a lojbo sanga bo valsi lo skina lo tcita .a lo notci= pagbu

=A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 ki'e do'u,

=A0 =A0 =A0 =A0 =A0--gejyspa

On Fri, Oct 4, 2013 at 12:38= PM, guskant <gusni.kantu@gmail.com> wrote:

Le lundi 26 septemb= re 2011 02:02:54 UTC+9, la arxokuna a =E9crit=A0:
ki'e .arpis.

I chose su'u instead of du'u as= su'u should be used in cases when the beginner is unsure whether to us= e nu or du'u. So this is the case :-)
Also I tried to get rid= of lujvo replacing them with corresponding tanru and place tags (but you s= aid that they were better here).

Do you confirm my translation as grammatically correct = ?

Anyway jbofanva has only few posts. Is it dead o= r ? That's why I posted here.

Please check the= translation of one more song so that I won't create a new topic.

It's Russian song about an island called Choonga-Changa.

In this case I tried to create rhymes in exchange of losing= some sense. Although there is not much sense at all in the original.

Just check my grammar please.
In my translati= on the island is called "la .tcangas."

<= div>.i doi .tcangas.
blanu tsani vi
.i doi .tcangas.
cimni criso .ui
.i doi .tcangas.
gleki xabju ki
.i doi .tcangas.
mi'a sanga ti

.i ti daplu tai le gapru
.i lo lifri ku ka zifre
.i lo lifri ku ka zifre
.i doi .tcangas.

. i nu gleki lo ro vitke
. i temcimni narge citka
.i t= emcimni badna citka
.i doi .tcangas.

.i doi .tcangas.
xamgu stuzi .ua
.i doi .tcangas.
=
mi'a surla ca
.i doi .tcangas.
.i ko troci ti<= /div>
.i doi .tcangas.
mi'a kelci vi

doi la gleki=A0
i = mi ba'o sanga la tcungatcangas fi'o cpedu do
to zoi url
http://y= outu.be/xEt-aZpbFEQ

url
i mi jmina lu o'i mu xagji sofybakni cu zvati = le purdi li'u=A0
i ji'a stika loi jufra pe la tcungatcang= as
i ra'u lo cmevla cu cmima lo'i brivla=A0
to = zoi url

http://www.lojban.org/tiki/zasni+gerna+cenba+vreji
url

mi'e la guskant mu'o
<= br>
fa'o

I sang the song as la gleki re= quested.
The sentences are NOT parsed with the current parser bec= ause they obey the {zasni gerna}.

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