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[lojban-beginners] Re: lojban-beginners Digest V5 #197



Date: Sun, 26 Nov 2006 17:49:00 -0500
From: Pierre Abbat <phma@phma.optus.nu>
Subject: [lojban-beginners] Re: Translation exercise- critique requested

Jon MacLeod wrote:
> Please correct any errors I have made or provide suggestions to improve:
> 
> .ienai lenu cilre le la .lojban. bangu kei na frili .i.ia mi kakne lenu mi snura cusku lu lenu mi certu pilno la .lojban. cu selte'i banli narfrili fi lenu mi djuno le vlaste
> 
> Original English-
> "The Lojban language is not difficult to learn. I believe I can safely say that my vocabulary knowledge is the only major obstacle to fluent use of it."

{.ienai lenu cilre le la .lojban. bangu kei na frili}
This means that you are disagreeing with someone and asserting that 
Lojban's language is not easy to learn. I'd say {lonu cilre fi la 
lojban. na nandu}.
{mi snura cusku}
"I can safely say" is an idiom. What is the danger from which you are 
snura? Maybe you could say {mi birti cusku}.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say with {selte'i banli narfrili}, 
but try using {zunti} for "obstacle".

Pierre
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The words you suggested are closer than what I could find- the vocabulary resources at hand are not up to the task in my opinion. I would never have thought to look for 'hindrance' when searching for a translation of obstacle. I'm currently working on making a Lojban-English dictionary/Thesaurus, to make it easier to find the right word. It's going to take me awhile.

According to the dictionary, selte'i means 'x1 is/are the only one(s) among x2 with property x2', I was trying to do 'only great difficulty' for 'only major obstacle'. It's the lujvo for 'se steci'.

Thank you for your help, I'm happy to know I at least got close.

mi'e .topy'at. 
 
"I have a brain, I've just lost my mind." -Ian McLeod
 
"As a percentage of total universal knowledge, what I know is statistically insignificant." - me


 
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