[lojban-beginners] Berenstain Bears translation first draft is finished!!

[turnip <turnip@bcpl.net>]

Finally, I have finished the first draft of the translation of "The Berenstain 
Bears and the Prize Pumpkin."  It is available here: 
http://www.lojban.org/tiki/tiki-index.php?page=The+Berenstain+Bears+and+the+Prize+Pumpkin
I would appreciate it if fluent lojbanists can take a look at it and critique 
it.  Go ahead, I can take it.  :-)  You can use the "discuss" page linked 
there for this purpose.

Also, if this message could be forwarded to the main list, I'd appreciate it, 
for more widespread dispersion.

                Thanks all,
                  --Mike "gejyspa" Turniansky