[lojban-beginners] Re: Please review #003

[Cortesi <dcortesi@mindspring.com>]

On Apr 22, 2007, at 6:21 AM, ANDREW PIEKARSKI wrote:

> "Your thoughts are extremely complex.  You are very beautiful,  
> however, I prefer your mind."
>  .i le do se pensi traji loka ce'u pluja .i do mutce melbi ku'i mi  
> nelcu'a le do menli

(1) I admire your willingness to try things in public. Thank you.

(2) I don't see any need for (nor get sense of) {loka ce'u} -- why  
not simply

	.i le do se pensi cu traji pluja .i...

which exactly matches the English.  (Or, use {mutce} in both clauses,  
for poetic parallelism?)

Dave Cortesi