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[lojban-beginners] Re: Please review #003



Actually, I hate exposing my ignorance - but how else can I learn?

The reason I used {loka ce'u} was to find out if I can use it correctly (just practice!) - however, I admit it didn't occur to me to use a simple tanru.  Thanks.

mi'e .andrus.

----- Original Message ----
From: Cortesi <dcortesi@mindspring.com>
To: lojban-beginners@lojban.org
Sent: Sunday, April 22, 2007 1:27:59 PM
Subject: [lojban-beginners] Re: Please review #003


On Apr 22, 2007, at 6:21 AM, ANDREW PIEKARSKI wrote:

> "Your thoughts are extremely complex.  You are very beautiful,  
> however, I prefer your mind."
>  .i le do se pensi traji loka ce'u pluja .i do mutce melbi ku'i mi  
> nelcu'a le do menli

(1) I admire your willingness to try things in public. Thank you.

(2) I don't see any need for (nor get sense of) {loka ce'u} -- why  
not simply

    .i le do se pensi cu traji pluja .i...

which exactly matches the English.  (Or, use {mutce} in both clauses,  
for poetic parallelism?)

Dave Cortesi