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Re: TEXT: pemci

To: Veijo Vilva <veion@XIRON.PC.HELSINKI.FI>
Subject: Re: TEXT: pemci
From: Logical Language Group <lojbab@ACCESS.DIGEX.NET>
Date: Thu, 1 Dec 1994 17:36:12 -0500
In-reply-to: <199412010342.AA18537@nfs1.digex.net> from "ucleaar" at Dec 1, 94 01:37:05 am
Reply-to: Logical Language Group <lojbab@ACCESS.DIGEX.NET>
Sender: Lojban list <LOJBAN%CUVMB.bitnet@FINHUTC.hut.fi>

>      lo ni fa le vi nanmu cu pinji
>      vau bancu le lakne zei linji
>      .i zmabra .i gohu
>      cu mukti .oirohu
>      le spepli be lo cmadesminji

In addition to the bugs pointed out by Goran, I would add that "go'u" is
no sumti; you want "le nu go'u" or maybe "de'u" (so either meter or rhyme
is lost).  Otherwise the poem isn't grammatical.

--
John Cowan              sharing account <lojbab@access.digex.net> for now
                e'osai ko sarji la lojban.

References:
- TEXT: pemci
  - From: ucleaar <ucleaar@ucl.ac.uk>

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