technical/scientific lujvo

["la_okus" <xeubie@hotmail.com>]

Please critique my lujvo:

solri (x1 is the sun of home planet x2 of race x3)
+
matra (x1 is a motor, driving/powering x2)
=
solmatra (m1=s1 is a solar cell powering m2)


brife (x1 blows from x2 with speed x3)
+
matra (x1 is a motor, driving/powering x2)
=
bifmatra (m1=b1 is a wind turbine powering m2)


flecu (x1 is a flow at x2 flowing to x3 from x4)
+
matra (x1 is a motor, driving/powering x2)
=
flematra (m1=f1 is a hydroelectric station powering m2)


dertu (x1 is dirt/ground from x2 containing x3)
+
glare (x1 is hot by standard x2)
+
matra (x1 is a motor, driving/powering x2)
=
derglamatra (m1=g1=d1 is a geothermal station powering m2)


rarna (x1 is natural)
+
mapti (x1 fits/is appropriate for x2 in property x3)
=
rarmapti (m1 is ergonomic for m2=r1 in property m3)


jmina (x1 adds x2 to x3 to make x4)
+
cange (x1 is a farm at x2 farmed by x3 making x4)
=
mincange (c1 is an aquaponics farm at c2 farmed by c3=j1 
making c4=j4)
[Note: aquaponics combines fish & plant farming]

spati (x1 is a plant of species x2)
+
jurme (x1 is a 1-celled lifeform of species/property x2)
=
spajurme (j1=s1 is algae of species/property j2=s2)


canlu (x1 is space/room occupied by x2)
+
platu (x1 plans/designs x2 for state/process x3)
=
calpla (p1 is an architect of p2=c1 for state/process p3)


selpla (x1 is planned/designed by x2 for state/process x3)
+
bangu (x1 is the language used by x2 to express x3)
=
selplabau (b1=s1 is the conlang used by b2 to express b3)


Did I omit the right place structures?

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