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Another try on alliteration



Here's another try on alliteration. This time I didn't
try to match two half-lines, but two stressed syllables
in a half-line alliterate.

mi JINvi .i da JIBni || le MIdju MUNje
.i TU'i da le TARci || cu JEMna gi'e JADni
le TSAni be le TERdi || be le PRAne PREnu

I think there near the center of the universe
there stars, those gems, are adorning
the sky of the home-planet of the perfect race.

Invokes some image from the science fiction, no?

mi'e sanxiyn.