[lojban] Re: coi / gramr corections plese?

[Andrew Heathwaite <lojban-out@lojban.org>]

Thank you very very much to everyone who posted corrections on my
comments page!  I understand almost all of them.  Maybe when I look
closer, I will understand all.  When I get the chance, I plan to fix
my errors and write new things.  Very soon I will order The Complete
Lojban Language, and that will help me a lot with continuing my
education.

Thank you thank you thank you!

ki'esai mi'e .andros.

--- Andrew Heathwaite <gtrpkt@yahoo.com> wrote:

> .i coi roda mi'e .andros.
> 
> ...and in English, hi, I'm Andrew.
> 
> First of all, I hope this is an appropriate request to make on this
> email list.  If not, I hope someone will set me straight.
> 
> I've been teaching myself Lojban for the past month or so.  I've
> almost completed _Lojban For Beginners_, and I'm planning to buy
> _The
> Complete Lojban Language_ sometime in the near future.  I'm serious
> about it; you should see my boxes of flashcards.  I've fallen in
> love
> with Lojban, and I want to become fluent and write songs in it.  I
> have started an online journal for practicing Lojban, and I was
> wondering if somebody experienced with the language would be
> interested in reading over my little writings and offering
> corrections and suggestions.
> 
> I know that my stories are pointless and bebna; you don't have to
> tell me that.  I just want to know:
> 
> (A) Am I using grammar correctly?
> (B) Does what I'm writing make sense?
> (C) If not A or not B, what can I do to fix it?
> 
> I'd appreciate any help of that nature.  It's not good for me to
> practice bad grammar.  If I have misconceptions about how things
> are
> supposed to work, I'd like to know sooner rather than later.
> 
> I don't know if this email list is the right place for responses to
> these questions, since I am new to it.  I'd like to suggest that if
> you have responses to my writings you use the comments feature of
> my
> blog.  It's easy to do, and you don't have to register.
> 
> So here is the link to my blog:
> 
> http://androslojban.blogspot.com/
> 
> Thank you so much in advance!
> 
> .i .io ki'e mu'o
> 
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