[lojban] Elephants Dream first draft

["Matt Arnold" <lojban-out@lojban.org>]

Here is the first draft of my translation of the dialogue from the
short film Elephants Dream.

http://www.lojban.org/tiki/tiki-index.php?page=elephants+dream

Would someone proofread it for me and offer suggestions?

-epkat


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