Re: [lojban] Re: New Translation

["Jorge Llambias" <jjllambias@hotmail.com>]

la camgusmis cusku di'e

> >   la sol purjbeja'e bavmro
>
> Didn't think of la sol, actually.  Although I think I prefer:
>
> la sol purjberi'a bavmro

I suppose it depends on how you think the lujvo is interpreted.

I would interpret {purjbeja'e} as {jalge be le nu purjbe} and
{purjberi'a} as {rinka be le nu purjbe}.

You seem to interpret them as {nu purjbe kei je jalge} and
{nu purjbe kei je rinka}.

I usually try the {be} interpretation before the {je} one.
In this case they give somewhat opposite meanings.

> >    mi kufra le po'o ctino
>
> Changed that since then, actually:
>
> semu'i mi ctino kufra

 semu'ibo mi ctino se kufra

But that's two syllables too many, so maybe just:

 semu'ibo ctino kufra

> >     i mu'inai do darno mi
>
> Umm, I don't know.  8)  The .i is fixable:
>
> .oi mu'inai do darno mi

Actually, I forgot {bo} is necessary after {mu'inai}, so it
should be:

   mu'inaibo do darno mi

co'o mi'e xorxes


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