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Length competition (Re: from the classics)



Btw, PC, now that I get the joke, I think it would be both paedagogically
and Lojbanically appropriate if you inserted the 'I sense that...'
evidential as each animal does his hydroscopic analysis of the river.
Anything we can do to tie the inferences together that natural language
just leaves implicit is good.

It's your piece, not truly archival (I thought 'from the classics' meant
you dug this up from Lojban List while I was away), correct? In which
case, there were a couple of stylistic (not grammatical) thinks I didn't
like; if I get time (hmpf) I'll get back to you.

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