[lojban] Re: la jefnuzba pa moi

[Michael Turniansky <mturniansky@gmail.com>]

On Sun, Sep 20, 2009 at 5:00 AM, Stela Selckiku <selckiku@gmail.com> wrote:
> Below I've included the first issue of "la jefnuzba", the Weekly News.
> The second edition is now open for contributions and editing at
> http://etherpad.com/la-jefnuzba-re-moi
> Please note that the Weekly News and all contributions are entered
> into the Public Domain.
> (.i'e zifre ju gafygau .e'a fukpi)
>
> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>


Excellent job!  This is the first I'm hearing about this, and I hope
to contribute to the 2nd edition, time permitting.

If I may be permitted to kibitz about this issue, despite its already
having been put to bed:
"i ba zi lo nu fanmo kei .e'a .e'o benji lo selsku lo se cinri" You
still need the "cu" in there, otherwise the nu abstraction tanruizes
with "benji"

Twice the author(s) have used English quotes followed by "noi
fanva...." 'fanva" is a translator, not the translation.  Those should
have been   "noi se fanva...."

           --gejyspa


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