Re: [lojban] A comics: "lojbo ckule"

[Escape Landsome <escaaape@gmail.com>]

> Hi guys,
>
>  I've started a comics titled "lojbo ckule". I've just published the
> first 6 pages as a starter and as a way to introduce the characters
> and the enviironment (and even the introduction is still to be
> completed).


I'm glad you've done this, for it seems a real good job, yet I have
some remarks to state :

1°) For the purpose of paedagogics, do you intend to follow some plot
in the story ?  Does the plot relate to specific grammar points ?

2°) In the first pages, we see a teacher who provides info about
websites, wikis and so on...   According to me, this is a bit too
informative, but as it is only the beginning of the comics, the
following will have more content...  Anyway, wikis and websites are
data fluxes that "happen" in another time than the timespan of reading
a comics, how do you project to make these interact ?   Suppose there
is some new item on the wiki, will you insert it in the comics ?   It
would be at the same time a smart move, and also "not up-to-date",
because the wiki is in the "here and now", whereas the comics is in
the "already published".   I hope I made myself correctly understood
(?)

3°) For the fun, did you draw the characters yourself ?  The drawing
is very neat !

--esc

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