[lojban] Seeking assistance with Lojban in a story

[DataPacRat <datapacrat@gmail.com>]

I've been writing a rather odd science fiction story. At the point I'm currently writing, for complicated reasons, a main character is starting to pepper their English speech with Lojban's attitudinals, evidentials, discursives and vocatives.

While I'm probably familiar enough with them to avoid making any major blunders, and I have a beta-reader who knows how to check jbovlaste, I think I might be able to do even better if I could get some help and suggestions from one or more people who /really/ understand Lojban. For example, suggesting alternate attitudinal constructions, or pointing out places I missed where a discursive could be added.

Would anybody here be interested in becoming my Lojban reference expert? Failing that, would anyone care to check the Lojban I've written so far for obvious blunders? If either case is true, my current working draft can be commented on at https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-BfyA18VKxT_TJhfPtvFsj-0d7DY4BS1SLoY8fNfWc4/edit . (Please note that due to hardware issues, at present I can't interact with Google Docs' "Suggestions", only its "Comments".)

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Thank you for your time,
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DataPacRat
"Then again, I could be wrong."

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