Le mardi 2 juin 2015 02:46:58 UTC+2, Robin Powell a écrit :
http://users.digitalkingdom.org/~rlpowell/media/public/CLL_grey_proof_pics/
This is great! :)
So, the questions I could use help with:
1. Does anything look horribly wrong, besides the chapter pictures?
Especially font problems.
I don’t see anything horribly wrong.
Two remarks:
– The use of the typewriter apostrophe: While I suppose it's intentional with the Lojban text for historical or paedagogical reasons (what with the ASCII-only alphabet and all), in the English parts looks slightly out of place, especially in connection with those curly quotes.
– Section 1.1 reads <[…] in the article ““Loglan””, published in \emph{Scientific American}, June […]>, where one would expect <[…] in the article “Loglan”, published in \emph{Scientific American,} June […]> (or, perhaps, <[…] “‘Loglan’” […]>, if the quotation marks are part of the article title for some reason).