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From: Cyril Slobin <slobin@ice.ru>
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On Sun, 7 Jul 2002, Jorge Llambias wrote:

> >.i mi pu jinvi le du'u lo botpi pe la campan na ka'e porpi
> >.i xu mi pinxe du'e da
>
> Very nice! I suggest {pidu'e da} (too much of something)
> instead of {du'e da} (too many things) in the last line.

Yes, it would be better. And {lei vanju} instead of {le vanju}
in the very first line.

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Cyril Slobin <slobin@ice.ru>


