From a.rosta@lycos.co.uk Sat Sep 28 14:47:00 2002 Return-Path: X-Sender: a.rosta@lycos.co.uk X-Apparently-To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Received: (EGP: mail-8_1_1_4); 28 Sep 2002 21:47:00 -0000 Received: (qmail 56861 invoked from network); 28 Sep 2002 21:46:59 -0000 Received: from unknown (66.218.66.216) by m11.grp.scd.yahoo.com with QMQP; 28 Sep 2002 21:46:59 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO mailbox-7.st1.spray.net) (212.78.202.107) by mta1.grp.scd.yahoo.com with SMTP; 28 Sep 2002 21:46:59 -0000 Received: from oemcomputer (host213-121-69-42.surfport24.v21.co.uk [213.121.69.42]) by mailbox-7.st1.spray.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id C2AFD26DCF for ; Sat, 28 Sep 2002 23:46:54 +0200 (DST) To: "Lojban@Yahoogroups. Com" Subject: MELBI COI Date: Sat, 28 Sep 2002 22:48:31 +0100 Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Priority: 3 (Normal) X-MSMail-Priority: Normal X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook IMO, Build 9.0.2416 (9.0.2910.0) Importance: Normal X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V5.00.2615.200 From: "And Rosta" X-Yahoo-Group-Post: member; u=122260811 X-Yahoo-Profile: andjamin MELBI COI ca le cerni mi co'a cikna doi melbi coi melbi coi melbi coi coi coi ca le cerni mi co'a cikna gi'e viska le gunta vi doi xarnyfapro mi ko se vimcu doi melbi coi melbi coi melbi coi coi coi doi xarnyfapro mi ko se vimcu i mi morsi da'i au i le nunfapro mi mrogau da'i doi melbi coi melbi coi melbi coi coi coi i le nunfapro mi mrogau da'i ije ko dersetca mi i dersetca vi lei bracmana doi melbi coi melbi coi melbi coi coi coi i dersetca vi lei bracmana vi lo xrula ctino au i le prenu poi fe mi litru doi melbi coi melbi coi melbi coi coi coi i le prenu poi fe mi litru cu se li'i rulmle ua i ti xrula lo xarnyfapro doi melbi coi melbi coi melbi coi coi coi i ti xrula lo xarnyfapro poi mroselfu le kamzifre i se xunre le ko'a lanci doi melbi coi melbi coi melbi coi coi coi i se xunre le ko'a lanci be le kamzifre o'a cai - all improvements welcomed. I particularly struggled with trying to find ways to avoid ending lines (fourth lines) on a trochee -- "poi mroselfu le kam zifre" is particularly annoying; it would be nice if Lojban song allowed elision of the final vowel of a gismu. "fe mi litru" ought to be "mo'i zo'a mi litru"; I considered "i le be mo'i zo'a mi litru" as an alternative. ro nu sanga ko'a mi rinka lo nu klaku http://ljevicar.tripod.com/bella_ciao.htm http://web.tiscali.it/dgo/antifa/antifa_musica.htm http://web.tiscali.it/ilgiovanecomunista/o_bella_ciao.htm http://www.chumba.com/_download.htm http://www.grasgasse.de/lieder/bellaciao.htm --And.