From jjllambias@hotmail.com Sat Sep 28 16:25:55 2002 Return-Path: X-Sender: jjllambias@hotmail.com X-Apparently-To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Received: (EGP: mail-8_1_1_4); 28 Sep 2002 23:25:54 -0000 Received: (qmail 84828 invoked from network); 28 Sep 2002 23:25:54 -0000 Received: from unknown (66.218.66.218) by m9.grp.scd.yahoo.com with QMQP; 28 Sep 2002 23:25:54 -0000 Received: from unknown (HELO hotmail.com) (216.33.241.133) by mta3.grp.scd.yahoo.com with SMTP; 28 Sep 2002 23:25:55 -0000 Received: from mail pickup service by hotmail.com with Microsoft SMTPSVC; Sat, 28 Sep 2002 16:25:55 -0700 Received: from 200.69.6.55 by lw8fd.law8.hotmail.msn.com with HTTP; Sat, 28 Sep 2002 23:25:54 GMT To: lojban@yahoogroups.com Bcc: Subject: Re: [lojban] MELBI COI Date: Sat, 28 Sep 2002 23:25:54 +0000 Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed Message-ID: X-OriginalArrivalTime: 28 Sep 2002 23:25:55.0519 (UTC) FILETIME=[64BBB4F0:01C26746] From: "Jorge Llambias" X-Originating-IP: [200.69.6.55] X-Yahoo-Group-Post: member; u=6071566 X-Yahoo-Profile: jjllambias2000 Bellissimo! ki'e doi and >i ti xrula lo xarnyfapro >doi melbi coi melbi coi melbi coi coi coi >i ti xrula lo xarnyfapro >poi mroselfu le kamzifre > >- all improvements welcomed. I particularly struggled with trying to find >ways to avoid ending lines (fourth lines) on a trochee -- "poi mroselfu >le kam zifre" is particularly annoying; It seems to be the only little problem. How about {poi nunzifre mroselfu io}? (nunzifre seems like something worth more dying for than kamzifre.) >it would be nice if Lojban song >allowed elision of the final vowel of a gismu. That's Esperanto... :) >"fe mi litru" ought to be >"mo'i zo'a mi litru"; I considered "i le be mo'i zo'a mi litru" as an >alternative. Yes, but {pe} instead of {be} to be grammatical. I like {fe mi litru} though. mu'o mi'e xorxes _________________________________________________________________ Join the world’s largest e-mail service with MSN Hotmail. http://www.hotmail.com