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Subject: Re: [lojban] LotR opener & ramblings
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From: Elrond <grey.havens@earthling.net>


On Wed, 14 Feb 2001, Jay Kominek wrote:

> The English:
>
> One ring to rule them all,
> One ring to find them,
> One ring to bring them all,
> and in the darkness bind them.
>
> My Lojban:
>
> le pa djine se finti fi zu'o turni piro zo'e
> .i le pa djine se finti fi zu'o facki piro zo'e
> .i le pa djine se finti fi zu'o vizbei piro zo'e
> .ije nenri fe le manku fa le pu'u rinju kei
>
> The repeated zo'e seems ungraceful, but I don't have a better idea.

My Lojban:

pa djine tefi'e zu'o turni ko'a goi roda
.i pa djine tefi'e zu'o facki ra
.i pa djine tefi'e zu'o vizbei ko'a
.ije ne'i le manku tefi'e ralte ra

Perhaps the [goi roda] could be dropped.

Comments ?

co'o mi'e rafael

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