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Subject: Re: tanru [was: RE: [lojban] Three more issues
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In a message dated 4/19/2001 5:59:26 PM Central Daylight Time, 
graywyvern@hotmail.com writes:


> fu'e.o'onairu'e pe'ipei srera xaksu fa mi le nuntroci temci
> lepu'u finti le bi'unai broda cei skutcaci co lobykai .i xu
> zasti fa le drata be la'edi'u .i pa'e lo broda ba binxo fi ma
> .onai le nuntroci pesekai leka mibypre fu'o .i to'u ko mintu
> zukte gi'ebabo te cmene fa la xlali fe le jalge be le nuntroci
> nanca poi zirpu ja lojbo
> 
A case in point:
"Rant: How should I feel I mistakenly wasted time in attempting...[syntax 
break here]
... the creation of whatchamacallits, i.e. characteristic Lojban modes of 
expression. Does any other exist aside from the referent of the last 
sentence? Under what conditions, honestly, will these whatchamacallits 
change unless attempts possessing me-person-ness? End Rant.
Do likewise and then the bad will call the results of the purple and 
lojbanic years of attempts names."
Answers: Shitty. Yes (I have a couple hundred pages under analysis, of which 
only about thirty are yours -- and they include considerable English, 
fortunately). Lots of other people use the language for lots of things, not 
just short stories, tirades, and cryptic suggestions. 

Last sentence changed to "the results of the purple and Lojbanic years will 
be called bad."
Note: I called your stuff hard to follow and frequently unclear (see above), 
not bad in any esthetic sense, and often not even in a grammatical one.

I'd love to take your advice, but my expertise -- if any -- lies elsewhere, 
so I stick to tht last for now.

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<HTML><FONT FACE=arial,helvetica><BODY BGCOLOR="#ffffff"><FONT SIZE=2>In a message dated 4/19/2001 5:59:26 PM Central Daylight Time, 
<BR>graywyvern@hotmail.com writes:
<BR>
<BR>
<BR><BLOCKQUOTE TYPE=CITE style="BORDER-LEFT: #0000ff 2px solid; MARGIN-LEFT: 5px; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px; PADDING-LEFT: 5px">fu'e.o'onairu'e pe'ipei srera xaksu fa mi le nuntroci temci
<BR>lepu'u finti le bi'unai broda cei skutcaci co lobykai .i xu
<BR>zasti fa le drata be la'edi'u .i pa'e lo broda ba binxo fi ma
<BR>.onai le nuntroci pesekai leka mibypre fu'o .i to'u ko mintu
<BR>zukte gi'ebabo te cmene fa la xlali fe le jalge be le nuntroci
<BR>nanca poi zirpu ja lojbo
<BR></BLOCKQUOTE>
<BR>A case in point:
<BR>"Rant: How should I feel I mistakenly wasted time in attempting...[syntax 
<BR>break here]
<BR>... the creation of whatchamacallits, i.e. characteristic Lojban modes of 
<BR>expression. &nbsp;Does any other exist aside from the referent of the last 
<BR>sentence? &nbsp;Under what conditions, honestly, will these whatchamacallits 
<BR>change unless attempts possessing me-person-ness? &nbsp;End Rant.
<BR>Do likewise and then the bad &nbsp;will call the results of the purple and 
<BR>lojbanic years of attempts names."
<BR>Answers: Shitty. &nbsp;Yes (I have a couple hundred pages under analysis, of which 
<BR>only about thirty are yours -- and they include considerable English, 
<BR>fortunately). &nbsp;Lots of other people use the language for lots of things, not 
<BR>just short stories, tirades, and cryptic suggestions. &nbsp;
<BR>
<BR>Last sentence changed to "the results of the purple and Lojbanic years will 
<BR>be called bad."
<BR>Note: I called your stuff hard to follow and frequently unclear (see above), 
<BR>not bad in any esthetic sense, and often not even in a grammatical one.
<BR>
<BR>I'd love to take your advice, but my expertise -- if any -- lies elsewhere, 
<BR>so I stick to tht last for now.</FONT></HTML>

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