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[jbovlaste] Re: Alice in Wonderland 05



> 
> > 3) reskla
> > k1 reskla k2 k3 k4
> > k1 creeps/crawls on all fours/on hands and knees/with body close to the
> > ground to k2 from m3 via k4
> > from
> > k1 klama k2 k3 k4 k5 tai lo respa r2
> 
> Sounds good to me, though "resydzu" would work equally well (there is a 
> destination, the garden, but it's not mentioned in that sentence). k5 is 
> obviously legs, and m3 is obviously a typo.
> 
> The sentence at the beginning of the paragraph is wrong, though. "i bazi lo nu 

> abu catlu cu se farna lo cmalu ke blaci tanxe noi cnita le jubme" - should 
> be "baziku" or "bazibo". As it stands, soon after she looks, a small glass 
> box is in some direction from something.
> 

I believe I brought this to Xorxes' attention, but he has yet to make the 
change.

totus