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[jbovlaste] Re: Alice in Wonderland 05



On Saturday 17 July 2010 13:59:20 A. PIEKARSKI wrote:
> coi ro do
>
> Please comment
>
> 1) braze'a
> z1=b1 braze'a b2 (ka) z3
> z1=b1 grows/increases in property b2 (ka) by amount z3
> from 
> z1=b1 zenba loka barda b2 b3 kei z3
> drop b3
>
>
> 2) cmaze'a
> z1=c1 cmaze'a c2 z3
> z1=c1 shrinks/decreases in property c2 (ka) by amount z3
> drop c3

Both sound good. b3 and c3 cancel.

> 3) reskla
> k1 reskla k2 k3 k4
> k1 creeps/crawls on all fours/on hands and knees/with body close to the
> ground to k2 from m3 via k4
> from
> k1 klama k2 k3 k4 k5 tai lo respa r2

Sounds good to me, though "resydzu" would work equally well (there is a 
destination, the garden, but it's not mentioned in that sentence). k5 is 
obviously legs, and m3 is obviously a typo.

The sentence at the beginning of the paragraph is wrong, though. "i bazi lo nu 
abu catlu cu se farna lo cmalu ke blaci tanxe noi cnita le jubme" - should 
be "baziku" or "bazibo". As it stands, soon after she looks, a small glass 
box is in some direction from something.

Pierre

-- 
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