[lojban-beginners] Re: feedback please

[peter hering <pjhering@gmail.com>]

Pierre Abbat wrote:
> On Wednesday 06 August 2008 21:05:48 peter hering wrote:
>   
> >  I wrote the following for my blog.  I am certain it is rife with errors
> > and even more certain that I distorted or omitted much of the meaning.  Any
> > suggestions for improvement would be much appreciated.
> >
> >  ni'o mi terve'u ci le me la .reskius. me'u feska'e sfani terkavbu goi ry
> >     
I've changed it to "ni'o mi terve'u ci le feska'e ke sfani terkavbu me'e 
la reskius. goi ry"
> "lo vorme sekai le nerkla po'o" brings up an image of a trapdoor, not a 
> funnel, to me. I suggest "lo vorme be tetai lo konfletci".
>   
A conical current eater?  I like the image that suggests.

Thanks, Pierre.

Pete