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Re: [lojban-beginners] Re: One popular Russian song in Lojban

Wonderful! {mutce nelci}

Just one question:
in the third line, did you pick {su'u} rather than {du'u} for a reason?

Also, the beginners' list isn't exactly the place for translations, so I suggest you also submit it to https://groups.google.com/group/jbofanva

While you're there, you might also want to take a look at my horrible attempt to translate город золотой
https://groups.google.com/group/jbofanva/browse_thread/thread/18e7d7d388131986
(I was going for a literal translation, but that's because I can't do an idiomatic one.)

On Sun, Sep 25, 2011 at 1:46 AM, gleki <gleki.is.my.name@gmail.com> wrote:
OK, one more attempt.

tirna fa mi fe lo melbi balvi voksa
ku noi klacpe lo tcemanci stuzi ku
gi'e preti cusku .a'esai lo su'u                   -    so that the whole question is expressed with some alertness (.a'esai)
mi pu zukte ma lo balvi zmadu ku

.i mi nupre lo nu mi ba vrude zmadu
gi'e sidju lo mi pendo ku ro roi
.i da voksa .ije sutra klama fa mi
fo lo farna barna claxu pluta ku

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