[lojban-beginners] One popular Russian song in Lojban

[gleki <gleki.is.my.name@gmail.com>]

Hi from Russia. I'm very interested in Lojban language. Together with my pen friends
I decided to translate one text into Lojban. It's a popular Russian song called "Wonderful Distant Future".
Here is the accompaniment. And here is the song itself in Russian.

I also translated the song into English so that you can check my translation. English translation doesn't preserve the rhythm. Lojbanic does.

I hope you'll point out my mistakes so that i can make corrections and and then upload the song onto Youtube.

I can hear a voice from the Beautiful distant Future
A morning voice in a silvery dew.
I can hear the voice and a luring road
Is driving me mad like a merry-go-round in childhood
Refrain:
Oh the Beautiful distant Future !
Don't be cruel to me !
Don't be cruel to me !
Don't be cruel !
From a clear source
to the Beautiful distant Future,
to the Beautiful distant Future
I'm starting my way.

I can hear the voice from the Beautiful distant Future
It's calling me into wonderful lands.
I can hear the voice and it's strictly asking me
What I did today for tomorrow

I swear that I'll become more pure and kind
And will never leave my friend in trouble
I can hear the voice and I'm running in a hurry to the calling
Via a road where there are no trails

ti'e voksa to'o lozu melbi balvi
ku noi jbini fe lo cerni dirgo ku
.i da voksa ja'e makfa trina pluta
du'i lonu vofli ku macri'a mi

.i doi zu melbi balvi
ko ba fe mi na jursa
.i pe'u doi zu balvi
ko jimpe fi mi
.i fi lo klina krasi
fe lozu melbi balvi
.e lonu manci balvi
cu klama ca fa mi

ti'e voksa to'o lozu melbi balvi
ku noi klacpe lo tcemanci tutre ku
.i da voksa zo'u da ca junri cpedu
lu do gunka fi bavlamdei pu fe ma

.i mi nupre lonu mi ba vrude zmadu
gi'e sidju lo mi pendo ku roi ku
.i da voksa ja'e sutra bajra fa mi
fe lo pluta be fo li no farna ku

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