Hi, finally got a chance to read through this and I don't know if you've already discussed the following points, so if so, please ignore:
1. You are using "ralte" where you probably more likely want "ponse"
2. Why "mi srana lo xance" rather than "mi se xance"?
3. You are using "srana" in panels 62-65 (and maybe elsewhere) when you really want "ckini" if you mean "related to". "srana" means "pertaining to"
4. You are using "verba" where you probably want "panzi" Where the latter is not incorrect, per se, it's the analog to tixnu and and bersa that you are using in those panels.
--gejyspa
On Thu, Apr 19, 2012 at 11:18 PM, Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com> wrote:
Okay, so that's all of them. There are some things I feel need a bit of editing, but I can easily do that myself. I doubt the final touches should take longer than an hour or thereabouts. I'll let you know when it's done and where I've put it so you can see the final product.
On Thu, Apr 19, 2012 at 6:26 PM, Rex May <rmay@mac.com> wrote:
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mu'o mi'e .aionys.
.i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do zo'o
(Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )
On Thu, Apr 19, 2012 at 9:16 PM, Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com> wrote:
On Thu, Apr 19, 2012 at 5:25 PM, Rex May <rmay@mac.com> wrote:
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mu'o mi'e .aionys.
.i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do zo'o
(Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )
On Thu, Apr 19, 2012 at 9:15 PM, Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com> wrote:On Thu, Apr 19, 2012 at 5:00 PM, Rex May <rmay@mac.com> wrote:
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mu'o mi'e .aionys.
.i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do zo'o
(Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )
On Thu, Apr 19, 2012 at 9:15 PM, Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com> wrote:
On Thu, Apr 19, 2012 at 3:11 PM, Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com> wrote:---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Rex May <rmay@mac.com>
Date: Thu, Apr 19, 2012 at 2:15 PM
Subject: Re: Lojban pics
To: Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com>
On Apr 19, 2012, at 1:27 PM, Rex May wrote:<lcpic0010.jpg><lcpic0010.jpg><lcpic0010.jpg><lcpic0011.jpg><lcpic0011.jpg><lcpic0012.jpg><lcpic0012.jpg><lcpic0013.jpg><lcpic0013.jpg><lcpic0014.jpg><lcpic0014.jpg><lcpic0015.jpg><lcpic0015.jpg><lcpic0016.jpg><lcpic0017.jpg><lcpic0018.jpg><lcpic0019.jpg><lcpic0020.jpg>I don't know why there's more than one copy of some of these. But here they are
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mu'o mi'e .aionys.
.i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do zo'o
(Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )
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mu'o mi'e .aionys.
.i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do zo'o
(Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )
--
mu'o mi'e .aionys.
.i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do zo'o
(Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )
--
mu'o mi'e .aionys.
.i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do zo'o
(Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )
--
mu'o mi'e .aionys.
.i.e'ucai ko cmima lo pilno be denpa bu .i doi.luk. mi patfu do zo'o
(Come to the Dot Side! Luke, I am your father. :D )
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