[lojban-beginners] "Something besides [...]" translation

[".arpis." <rpglover64+jbobau@gmail.com>]

{da xu noi na nu tcidu fi lo kibro lisxra ku'o seldji}

"Is there something you want to do besides reading that webcomic?"

Questions:

Is my choice of {noi} over {poi} incorrect or otherwise bad?

Is there something besides an experimental gismu or an absurdly long lujvo I can use to describe the internet? Is {lo me la .internet. lisxra} reasonable?

Is there something horribly wrong with the phrasing? Would you say it another way?

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mu'o mi'e .arpis.

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