[lojban-beginners] tordu lisri (short story)

[mirhagk <mirhagk@gmail.com>]

Hey I'm new to lojban and just for practice/fun I wrote a tiny little
short story (more of a paragraph lol). Can someone please proofread it
or something? (The english is in brackets above each sentence so you
know kinda what I wanted to say)

[The wolf]
le lapno

[the wolf crept over the hill]
.i le lapno ku cpare lo derxi

[he looks over the valley and selects his prey]
.i go'i fe selcta fa lo ma'arbi'i ku .e cuxna le go'i pe lo se kalte

[slowly moving towards his prey]
.i masno muvdu le go'i pe lo se kalte

[he prepares to punce]
.i bregau fi lo gunta

[he reaches his prey and kills it]
.i mulkla le go'i pe lo se kalte .e catra ti

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