[lojban-beginners] Re: Translation effort...

[c1tk@c1tk.cjb.net]

Hello all,

[Adam D. Lopresto:]

> >     Theologians define Evil as a supernatural force vying against God to
> >     corrupt mankind.
> grouping is off, so that the theologians are only asserting that it's a
> supernatural force, and ba'e you are the one asserting that it vies against
> God to corrupt mankind.
[...]
> .i lo'e jdactu cu xusra le du'u le ka palci cu makfa bapli gi'e gunka le
> zu'o fapro le cevni kei le za'i le prenu cu pacybi'o

[Jorge Llambías:]

> lo'e jdactu cu te smuni lo'e palci lo'e makfa bapli poi gunka le nu fapro
> le cevni kei le nu lo'e remna cu tolcuvbi'o

Thanks all. Is there any important difference between using "curve" and
"pacybi'o"/"tolcuvbi'o" in this context, or is it just a matter of taste?
Also, what is the correct way (if any) to string together several
assertions in general within "du'u"?

Thanks,
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