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I tried another translation (again from Wikipedia). Please correct my errors & malglico.

la'o gy the Internet gy cu ke gu'e terji kampu gi cecmu kuspe ke'e se tcana lei skami gi'e stuzi le nu le dikca datni bo vasru cu se canja sepi'o le fadni la'o gy Internet Protocol gy to .ibu.py toi .i la'o gy the Internet gy goi lo samseltcana cu me le ba'e ciste be fi lei ciste ku ni'i le nu lei so'i cmamau ciste co lanzu ce ckule ce kagni ce turni cu ge se vasru sy gi xe benji fe le vrici datni joi le telse'u noi mu'a le samymri .a le samytav .a le datnyvei benji .a le gunma ke dikca paprysfe ke'e .a le drata ri

The Internet is a worldwide, publicly accessible network of interconnected computer networks that transmit data by packet switching using the standard Internet Protocol (IP). It is a "network of networks" that consists of millions of smaller domestic, academic, business, and government networks, which together carry various information and services, such as electronic mail, online chat, file transfer, and the interlinked web pages and other documents of the world wide web.

I've already got some questions:

1) Is {ke ... ke'e} the best way to separate {gu'e ... gi ...} and {se tcana}?

2) Is {le fadni la'o gy ... gy} valid?

3) Is {lei so'i ...} valid? Also, is the tanru structure {lei ... co ... ce ... ce ...} valid?

4) Is the usage of the connectives {joi} and {.a} in the last part fine?


mu'o mi'e vid.