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Re: [lojban] i fulta le flecu



la sanxiyn fanva fu di'e

> i fulta le flecu
> i na xrudji i mu'i bo darno
> i le nu pensi cu za'o ranji
> i ja'e bo djize'a
> i le nu nicte cu za'o ranji
> i ja'enai bo na ka'e sipna
> i le bumru cu lunsa
> i ja'e bo cimri'a murse

Very nice! My first thought was that {i le nu pensi 
cu za'o ranji} and {i le nu nicte cu za'o ranji} could
be replaced by just {i za'o pensi} and {i za'o nicte},
but maybe for the poem the heavier construction works
better.

> Chinese, English, Lojban are not my native languages, nor
> I am very good at them. Well, I hope you got the meaning.

You are very good at Lojban, and I don't see anything wrong
with your English, but then they are not my native languages 
either! :)

mu'o mi'e xorxes



		
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